for The Ancient Butterfly Dance4/24/2003 c1 
23Fina Arvanthol
You are an excellent poet and I really enjoyed this poem. It has much meaning and is true to life. Keep writing!
-Gamer GX
23Fina ArvantholYou are an excellent poet and I really enjoyed this poem. It has much meaning and is true to life. Keep writing!
-Gamer GX
4/23/2003 c1 64not sure yet
wow, i love that last part there, the whole thing is great though, beautiful with excellent imagry, nicely done
64not sure yetwow, i love that last part there, the whole thing is great though, beautiful with excellent imagry, nicely done
4/23/2003 c1 14Dirty Wallpaper
*insane giggles*
so ive been stalking all the best authors on fictionpress, cause ive been so bored and thirsty for some good poetry...and i know ive already read this...and even though i read it thousands of times when you sent it to me before...i had to read it again *insane giggles*...wonderful i just, im humbled in your talent. so im going to review because i feel obliged to.
"You were beautiful
As the silver moon to me,
With eyes like nothing else on earth
That moved me to the edge of insanity
Time and time again."
my absolute favourite part of the poem, mostly because whenever someone uses the moon either as a metaphor/simile in a poem i think a genius' and because the very timing of the words and how you have used them are altogether beautiful. *claps* i think its dangerous to be this excited over literiture...i mean i was ecstatic even *before* i had read it again. crimany. kudo as always. write more please? *begs*
14Dirty Wallpaper*insane giggles*
so ive been stalking all the best authors on fictionpress, cause ive been so bored and thirsty for some good poetry...and i know ive already read this...and even though i read it thousands of times when you sent it to me before...i had to read it again *insane giggles*...wonderful i just, im humbled in your talent. so im going to review because i feel obliged to.
"You were beautiful
As the silver moon to me,
With eyes like nothing else on earth
That moved me to the edge of insanity
Time and time again."
my absolute favourite part of the poem, mostly because whenever someone uses the moon either as a metaphor/simile in a poem i think a genius' and because the very timing of the words and how you have used them are altogether beautiful. *claps* i think its dangerous to be this excited over literiture...i mean i was ecstatic even *before* i had read it again. crimany. kudo as always. write more please? *begs*