for Cry6/19/2004 c1 
49recalcitrant
i think that this is a very impressive write. it has a unique style and a strong voice. good job.
i hope you will take some time to review some of my work as well.
49recalcitranti think that this is a very impressive write. it has a unique style and a strong voice. good job.
i hope you will take some time to review some of my work as well.
4/23/2003 c1 89Lyria Shard
I loved this. Believe me, you're not the only sufferer, i feel like that ALL the time.
Sal
89Lyria ShardI loved this. Believe me, you're not the only sufferer, i feel like that ALL the time.
Sal
4/23/2003 c1 2katyruth
cool poem. i think it would add more depth if you some how showed what it is your were crying about. obviously it was something significant because you said it takes a lot to make you cry. the description of crying is nice, that is exactly how crying comes on. keep writing!
-katy(come review me if you get a chance!)
2katyruthcool poem. i think it would add more depth if you some how showed what it is your were crying about. obviously it was something significant because you said it takes a lot to make you cry. the description of crying is nice, that is exactly how crying comes on. keep writing!
-katy(come review me if you get a chance!)