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6/15/2003 c1 A.L.Rose
Hello. Hey ur story has a good start out. I think it is great. Very good writing. It would be nice if you wrote another chapter.
4/27/2003 c1 Ahmes-Nefertari
This is very good. I like the plot. Maybe you could try to extend the story. Please write more...
4/26/2003 c1 1angel24
Oh! Atlast a story about the babylonian civilization!

Great job.Keep it up.
4/25/2003 c1 3Melrick
I guess if you were going to be enslaved by someone, the Hittites weren't a bad choice, since their slaves got things a little better than most. It's a good start to your story. Short, but good. I hope you continue with it.
4/24/2003 c1 5Knightengale
Very well-written. I'd like to see more.
4/24/2003 c1 25faery tragedy
Naturally historical accurate. I've never read anything quite on Babylonia. But I'm eager to read more of this. Miya sounds like an interesting character, but I'm really hope she's strong enough for the life of a slave!

You may want to try to observe the scenery. Only a friendly suggestion!

Nice work. Please upload more!

*Faery Tragedy

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