
8/7/2013 c2 Guest
really looking forward to where you are going to take this story. thank you for sharing it, benny
really looking forward to where you are going to take this story. thank you for sharing it, benny
6/14/2004 c1
6ShinjitsuNoHikari
Aww, I really was starting to get into this story and you haven't updated it since last year. ;_; It's a bit odd to get past the age thing-Christa is 4 by the time she's in a unit, and her language as well as other 'intelligence' skills are that of someone in their early teens. Aside from that, I generally like the story. It seems a bit lacking in some description though. You skip a few years, and although I do understand why you did that, it just seems that the story is rushed a little in that sense. Write more, I want to see what happens to Christa and her groupmates.

Aww, I really was starting to get into this story and you haven't updated it since last year. ;_; It's a bit odd to get past the age thing-Christa is 4 by the time she's in a unit, and her language as well as other 'intelligence' skills are that of someone in their early teens. Aside from that, I generally like the story. It seems a bit lacking in some description though. You skip a few years, and although I do understand why you did that, it just seems that the story is rushed a little in that sense. Write more, I want to see what happens to Christa and her groupmates.