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3/17/2004 c1 7ku
hmm. probably the best thing you've written here so far.
1/30/2004 c1 54ByFireAndMoonlight
I know! why must Parents, and News tell us all how horrable the world is? I mean like we REALLY ned to kow when we're three or four!
8/11/2003 c1 10M3tal Dl2agon
Nice poem! The way you write ur poems reminds me of one of my friends who writes poems. If I would try to write somthing like that, it would sound like crap lol. I suck at poems so much!

7/22/2003 c1 23Shalott13
So true, so true! And you described it so well! This is excellent.
7/20/2003 c1 Akiko Suzuki
7/16/2003 c1 17liz89
I love the way you use such strong words. They really grab you and make you pay attention.
7/8/2003 c1 Lorelei
This is really deep and true about what is going on around the world now days. You did a good job.
7/6/2003 c1 31CaramelMacchiato
I can certainly agree that children are growing up too fast. This poem emphasises that fact well. I really liked the last paragraph ..."Minds once virgin to the ideas of violence and hate

Have now been raped

By news unthinkable." Good use of evocative metaphors and repetition. Keep writing and bringing the truth out there!
7/2/2003 c1 56Blue SunriZe
Aw, I like this poem It's so true. Today's youth are growing up so fast. I know first hand about that. I'm 16 going on 17 and feel old as hell. Good job, and when you have time, please come review some of my writings.
6/27/2003 c1 63Taka and Keichirou
ah, nice this...pity about today's world...sigh...

6/20/2003 c1 1InsomniacDahmer
This is dead-on perfect. I have nothing else to say.
6/16/2003 c1 Phantom Poet
So true.Many children have been forced to accept life's brutalities and burdens before they're even ready for it.
5/30/2003 c1 asdf34215
That was really amazing, and I'm pretty sure you wrote it to coincide with current events and it really fit. It was depressing because it was the truth, or in other cases the truth that some are trying to hide from. All in all, amazing job. It was a great poem.
5/28/2003 c1 Shannon
Wow Jen! That poem was great. It is very sad to see that children can't have their childish innocence anymore.
5/27/2003 c1 3Liz Tucker
I agree, its horrible how innocent children have to worry about walking outside in their own neighberhood.

Very powerful.

Read some of my stuff i would luv ur comments!
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