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11/11/2003 c1 3hamsta-boi
Wish it was that simple to reach youre dreams. Really wish it was.
10/25/2003 c1 1Osiris God of Darkness
Um...it sounds like a pep talk, not a poem. There's also too little rhyming. But at least you tried.

~Osiris
6/24/2003 c1 22Gevo
great poem... never stop writing!
4/29/2003 c1 89Lyria Shard
This is definately your best poem ever - and I really really liked all of the other ones! Great job!

Princess Sal
4/26/2003 c1 Lazerponies
Wow, that’s beautiful and expressive. I love the message it conveys, good writing, keep doing it. (:
4/26/2003 c1 16Wooffles
Yayness...good poem!
4/26/2003 c1 3Kittlez
=D I love it. It's wonderful, and so true. I'll hang on to my dream of being a great author if you keep writing ^_^ *Hugglez*

"Before you critisize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you do critisize them, you're a mile away and you have their shoes." ~Mr. Kittlez™

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