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6/6/2003 c1 43musicluver
wow...i like it a lot especially because i liked one of my friends A LOT and i didn't tell him...there was no way i was going to tell him because there was no way i was going to ruin our friendship but my best friend ended up tell him and he wrote me a three and half page letter (he's also a very intense person) and he said that he loved me and that i was the right one for him...anyway...so that's my little story...hehe...also, i liked the use of old english near the end...good job.
4/30/2003 c1 4Angel Almasy
I was waiting for somebody to write this. Thx for doing what I've tried to do.
4/30/2003 c1 39Clockwork Angel
Your really obsess with her right...her little sister is pretty too you know...(wink) right?right?^^...well anyways this is sweet again among your tree this has got to be the sweetest and the saddest^^ nice...galing
4/27/2003 c1 13SilenceInsideForever
Very nice... Great sense of longing and feeling. Only, in verse 3, you suddenly switch to free-style. Disrupts the flow a little. :)

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