for Queen Of Dragons10/3/2009 c28 
4ckelley
That was a very fast update... but a very short chapter, I'm pleased either way. I'm glad those two are finally starting to actually like get together. It's exciting. Hope you update again soon. Good luck.
Cassie
4ckelleyThat was a very fast update... but a very short chapter, I'm pleased either way. I'm glad those two are finally starting to actually like get together. It's exciting. Hope you update again soon. Good luck.
Cassie
10/2/2009 c27 ckelley
So, I haven't read this in a really long time, so long I had to re-read it. I really hope that you continue and that we can see what's going to happen, because I feel like there is a lot more to this story, especially about the ex. We still don't know the entire story or how's it going to effect things.
So, I haven't read this in a really long time, so long I had to re-read it. I really hope that you continue and that we can see what's going to happen, because I feel like there is a lot more to this story, especially about the ex. We still don't know the entire story or how's it going to effect things.
7/3/2009 c27 1Edara
I love it! More, More! Please write more!
I really want to know what happened to Sharon before she moved.
Cannot wait to read more.
Thankyou
1EdaraI love it! More, More! Please write more!
I really want to know what happened to Sharon before she moved.
Cannot wait to read more.
Thankyou
10/12/2008 c27 FerretsRevolution
I love this story...especially the last paragraph of this chapter..intense.
I love this story...especially the last paragraph of this chapter..intense.
2/9/2007 c25 13gabriellafaith
AGH you've GOT to be kidding me! You can't just stop!...you're killing me! If you don't update like...um...now, I'm going to rip my hair out. I love this story! I don't even normally like all the gushy-romance crap! This is wonderful! You're amazing!
*I did see some grammar/spelling mistakes, but that's besides the point...*
Update! NOW!
13gabriellafaithAGH you've GOT to be kidding me! You can't just stop!...you're killing me! If you don't update like...um...now, I'm going to rip my hair out. I love this story! I don't even normally like all the gushy-romance crap! This is wonderful! You're amazing!
*I did see some grammar/spelling mistakes, but that's besides the point...*
Update! NOW!
7/7/2006 c23 4ckelley
Hey, glad you updated I love this story. I really do, I hope you update again soon. Good luck and keep up the good work. Later
4ckelleyHey, glad you updated I love this story. I really do, I hope you update again soon. Good luck and keep up the good work. Later
2/2/2006 c21 5alineofprose
Bloody awesome, love! This has an incredible amount of potential. Just one quick thing: Damon seems a bit perfect. Are there more flaws to him? Continue soon, dear!
-Fire's Child
5alineofproseBloody awesome, love! This has an incredible amount of potential. Just one quick thing: Damon seems a bit perfect. Are there more flaws to him? Continue soon, dear!
-Fire's Child
12/4/2005 c20 MyOwnBestCritic
Overall, this is a good story. There aren't many spelling or technical errors, and you balance dialogue and detailed script. The only thing is that I really want to know what happened! You have to tell the readers soon, or they stop reading. Now that you have another review, that should be plenty of motivation.
0o-MyOwnBestCritic-o0
Overall, this is a good story. There aren't many spelling or technical errors, and you balance dialogue and detailed script. The only thing is that I really want to know what happened! You have to tell the readers soon, or they stop reading. Now that you have another review, that should be plenty of motivation.
0o-MyOwnBestCritic-o0
11/17/2005 c20 ckelley
Hmm... are we ever going to find out what happened to her in the past... I love this story and I'm really glad you finally updated. I hope you don't take as long to do it again.
Hmm... are we ever going to find out what happened to her in the past... I love this story and I'm really glad you finally updated. I hope you don't take as long to do it again.
8/26/2005 c19 Miz Em
Yay! I loved your story so far! ^^ The character's are great and I really like how much of a positive influence the parents seem to have on their kids. I'm really excited to see what will happen when Kelly come's, hehe. I'm not used to reading original fiction, so this was a real treat. Keep writing! ^_^
Yay! I loved your story so far! ^^ The character's are great and I really like how much of a positive influence the parents seem to have on their kids. I'm really excited to see what will happen when Kelly come's, hehe. I'm not used to reading original fiction, so this was a real treat. Keep writing! ^_^