for Divine Inflection9/16/2006 c10 sailorserena141
yoou havn't updated in years! please soon
yoou havn't updated in years! please soon
6/10/2006 c10 emily
put up another chapter! i need to know what happens!
put up another chapter! i need to know what happens!
35/11/2006 c5 Crazy Talk
I loved this one too. Naturally. Please...if you make this a sad ending...i will cry.
I loved this one too. Naturally. Please...if you make this a sad ending...i will cry.
5/11/2006 c4 Crazy Talk
Oh, my god. usually I hold off till the last chapter to coment...b.ut this is amazing! I love it!
Oh, my god. usually I hold off till the last chapter to coment...b.ut this is amazing! I love it!
3/21/2006 c10 Misery Jordan
First off I would like to say that I really like your story, I've been reading it whenever I have had the chance. I really like the plot and everything, like I said, it captivated me! The only thing I would say would be to get an editor to fix the spelling mistakes and stuff...a nd I might add a bit more detail. Don't take any offense to that, it is really good. But I think you could lay some things out better! Awsome job!
First off I would like to say that I really like your story, I've been reading it whenever I have had the chance. I really like the plot and everything, like I said, it captivated me! The only thing I would say would be to get an editor to fix the spelling mistakes and stuff...a nd I might add a bit more detail. Don't take any offense to that, it is really good. But I think you could lay some things out better! Awsome job!
3/19/2006 c1 Misery Jordan
Very Powerful chapter... It was captivating! you have a couple of words where you have left out letters, but other then that it was perfect. I'm going on to read the next chapter, awsome job!
Very Powerful chapter... It was captivating! you have a couple of words where you have left out letters, but other then that it was perfect. I'm going on to read the next chapter, awsome job!
1/29/2006 c10 atreyu love
god, please update! i really love this story! finish finish please? ^^... simeon sounds hot in demon form. and i love stories with angels and demons in it! so please update! :)
god, please update! i really love this story! finish finish please? ^^... simeon sounds hot in demon form. and i love stories with angels and demons in it! so please update! :)
10/16/2005 c2 TigerBlizzard
funny father
cool quotes
~GOD~
funny father
cool quotes
~GOD~
10/16/2005 c1 GOD
that was weird. hisei is definitely close enough to hisui, and kokuyo is kokuyo...and then the whole story is about an angel of high standards and a demon being in love...as someone been reading a little too much WISH? of course not! WISH rocks...but stil...this is cool...
~TigerBlizzard~
that was weird. hisei is definitely close enough to hisui, and kokuyo is kokuyo...and then the whole story is about an angel of high standards and a demon being in love...as someone been reading a little too much WISH? of course not! WISH rocks...but stil...this is cool...
~TigerBlizzard~
8/16/2005 c8 esplinV3
i think ur story is really great, i love the plot of angels and demons, very romantic. Chapter 9 isnt finished, is it? it just ended, and the ending didnt make sense as an ending. but i really did enjoy it.
i think ur story is really great, i love the plot of angels and demons, very romantic. Chapter 9 isnt finished, is it? it just ended, and the ending didnt make sense as an ending. but i really did enjoy it.
4/5/2005 c10 falconstrife86
Dude... What the heck is with Kokuyo? And... There's nothing more? Please update again soon! This is too good to leave hanging here! I wanna know what's up with Kokuyo! Are Hisei and Simeon going to parish? Will on fall or the other rise? WHAT?
Erm... Lol. ^_^; Sowwies. Please update again soon.
Dude... What the heck is with Kokuyo? And... There's nothing more? Please update again soon! This is too good to leave hanging here! I wanna know what's up with Kokuyo! Are Hisei and Simeon going to parish? Will on fall or the other rise? WHAT?
Erm... Lol. ^_^; Sowwies. Please update again soon.
4/5/2005 c9 falconstrife86
O.O
Kokuyo? What the... HUH?
Now that's a freaking annoying cliffhanger! At least the next chapter is up, though! ^_^ Great story!
And poor J.J. XD Darn I love him. ^_^
O.O
Kokuyo? What the... HUH?
Now that's a freaking annoying cliffhanger! At least the next chapter is up, though! ^_^ Great story!
And poor J.J. XD Darn I love him. ^_^