for Divine Inflection4/13/2004 c9 CJMe16
HEY! There IS someone who DOES like reading your story... how come your not writing! If it's because you haven't gotten reviews... well, I've NEVER gotten ANY reviews for ANY of my stories...
Update soon please!
HEY! There IS someone who DOES like reading your story... how come your not writing! If it's because you haven't gotten reviews... well, I've NEVER gotten ANY reviews for ANY of my stories...
Update soon please!
1/31/2004 c9 
1Meg Schick
o...m... g! UPDATE SOON! no scratch that... like now! lol. Itz soo good. i have to know what happens next. Keep writing and like i said...update, if not now, then REALLY REALLY REALLY soon!
~Nemesis
1Meg Schicko...m... g! UPDATE SOON! no scratch that... like now! lol. Itz soo good. i have to know what happens next. Keep writing and like i said...update, if not now, then REALLY REALLY REALLY soon!
~Nemesis
1/19/2004 c9 Poco-poco
Beef jerky!
Beef jerky!
1/16/2004 c9 christine
ooh... i like your story! post some more! please?
ooh... i like your story! post some more! please?
12/29/2003 c9 too lazy to sign in
oh! Where's the next chapter! come on this is getting really good pleassee hurry! I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it!
Hurry with the next chapter! Chop chop!
-me-
oh! Where's the next chapter! come on this is getting really good pleassee hurry! I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it!
Hurry with the next chapter! Chop chop!
-me-
12/28/2003 c9 1dinkydaelf
This is a great story! I like the part where Simeon says "Fits, doesn't it?" after he tells Hisei's brother that she's and angel...heh, please put up the next chapter soon!
*dances*
Dinky (^.^ )
1dinkydaelfThis is a great story! I like the part where Simeon says "Fits, doesn't it?" after he tells Hisei's brother that she's and angel...heh, please put up the next chapter soon!
*dances*
Dinky (^.^ )
12/25/2003 c9 ReBelleRose
this IS the preachiest of your chapters so far. the bit about kokyuko is a good twist, and the way that simeon reveals that he's stopped murdering people is touching in an understated way. keep it up! and that you didn't go on and on about how sorry you were for not updating was greatly appreciated. it's obnoxious when people do that and then write a crap chapter- much better to go ahead and write a great chap (what you did).
this IS the preachiest of your chapters so far. the bit about kokyuko is a good twist, and the way that simeon reveals that he's stopped murdering people is touching in an understated way. keep it up! and that you didn't go on and on about how sorry you were for not updating was greatly appreciated. it's obnoxious when people do that and then write a crap chapter- much better to go ahead and write a great chap (what you did).
12/24/2003 c9 4KazeShinai
Wow...you finally posted... where's the next chapter? I'll talk to you about it later... See you later, and keep wrting and get working on RoG! Owari
~SilentChaos89
4KazeShinaiWow...you finally posted... where's the next chapter? I'll talk to you about it later... See you later, and keep wrting and get working on RoG! Owari
~SilentChaos89
12/22/2003 c9 17Bob n Kazzi
I have reviewed. Oh my God! Why did he do that? Was he under another demon's -thingy power? Was he brainwahsed? Help let me know!
17Bob n KazziI have reviewed. Oh my God! Why did he do that? Was he under another demon's -thingy power? Was he brainwahsed? Help let me know!
12/17/2003 c9 NeverEndingQuest
YES! You updated! And such a good update too! You *must* post more! I must know why Kokuyo betrayed them. This is a great story and wonderfully written. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
-Quest
Oh yea, by any chance, did you ever read the manga series, "Wish"? It's really good, and also has the idea of angel/demon love. The names Kokuyo and Hisei (well, really Hisui, but close enough)are also in that series. That's one of the reasons i love your story so much. After reading "Wish", it made me want to read more stories like it! :-)
YES! You updated! And such a good update too! You *must* post more! I must know why Kokuyo betrayed them. This is a great story and wonderfully written. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
-Quest
Oh yea, by any chance, did you ever read the manga series, "Wish"? It's really good, and also has the idea of angel/demon love. The names Kokuyo and Hisei (well, really Hisui, but close enough)are also in that series. That's one of the reasons i love your story so much. After reading "Wish", it made me want to read more stories like it! :-)
12/15/2003 c9 1Salsbury Princess
cool story. I l;iked the twist at the end. very interesting
R/r Uncommon Betryals please!
1Salsbury Princesscool story. I l;iked the twist at the end. very interesting
R/r Uncommon Betryals please!
12/14/2003 c9 5aiur
=) i like it's a cool idea and very original and i didn't take any offence from any of it at all, and i was expecting to; usually topics like this make my blood burn with some of the things people say. but you didn't say anything too vulgar or anything like that. it's a really cool idea here so plz YES GET IT UP BY CHRISTMAS! =D i really really like this great job.
so yeah update soon i'll check back for it and check out my stuff plz
~k8
5aiur=) i like it's a cool idea and very original and i didn't take any offence from any of it at all, and i was expecting to; usually topics like this make my blood burn with some of the things people say. but you didn't say anything too vulgar or anything like that. it's a really cool idea here so plz YES GET IT UP BY CHRISTMAS! =D i really really like this great job.
so yeah update soon i'll check back for it and check out my stuff plz
~k8