for Whispers of Lullaby4/30/2003 c1 
68Princess Mulan
I didn't know you were sick!
I hope you are better now. I'm sorry I didn't see this poem before, I should have been paying more attention.
Sorry it took me so long to review this...I don't really have much computer time...
This is a really really wonderful poem! I love your words. very poetic. It warm my heart and my soul.
So nice to see something this wonderful after a long day...
you're the best!
68Princess MulanI didn't know you were sick!
I hope you are better now. I'm sorry I didn't see this poem before, I should have been paying more attention.
Sorry it took me so long to review this...I don't really have much computer time...
This is a really really wonderful poem! I love your words. very poetic. It warm my heart and my soul.
So nice to see something this wonderful after a long day...
you're the best!
4/30/2003 c1 11midnight dreams
*applauds* brilliant. you wrote this when you were sick...wow...i wonder how you write when you are well. Brilliant, nothing less. ^^
11midnight dreams*applauds* brilliant. you wrote this when you were sick...wow...i wonder how you write when you are well. Brilliant, nothing less. ^^
4/29/2003 c1 8Aureya of Chocolate
this was really pretty
very nice imagery, i thought it was really nice
keep it up
lotsa luv
jazzo
8Aureya of Chocolatethis was really pretty
very nice imagery, i thought it was really nice
keep it up
lotsa luv
jazzo
4/29/2003 c1 128Zainab
OOh..u should write poems when ur sick more often! That was really good! I liked it. The poem itself was gentle, and it flowed together very well.
128ZainabOOh..u should write poems when ur sick more often! That was really good! I liked it. The poem itself was gentle, and it flowed together very well.
4/28/2003 c1 28ChaoxAngel
It's very nicely done. Your choice of words is certainly very unique. I like this one.
~DW
PS. I couldn't do anything but to stay in bed when I'm ill.
28ChaoxAngelIt's very nicely done. Your choice of words is certainly very unique. I like this one.
~DW
PS. I couldn't do anything but to stay in bed when I'm ill.
4/28/2003 c1 Needa S
You were sick when you wrote this wow.. wish I had a little of that talented. Excellent!
You were sick when you wrote this wow.. wish I had a little of that talented. Excellent!
4/28/2003 c1 17Winged One1
I don't have to be any more gentler than I am...Your first line, "Summer may dissolve from the eye of the day" is eye-catching, and your vocabulary is simply amazing. It's great! winged one
17Winged One1I don't have to be any more gentler than I am...Your first line, "Summer may dissolve from the eye of the day" is eye-catching, and your vocabulary is simply amazing. It's great! winged one