for Stars5/7/2003 c1 
72CancerianQueen
Good night! :) I really like this. I have this feeling of this poem feels really soft and a nice feeling runs through me. I am weird, but I really like the way you write! :) Well done.
Keep writing more and more,
Vnomi. :)
72CancerianQueenGood night! :) I really like this. I have this feeling of this poem feels really soft and a nice feeling runs through me. I am weird, but I really like the way you write! :) Well done.
Keep writing more and more,
Vnomi. :)
5/6/2003 c1 1aleppine
This is so lovely! 'Beneath the cerulean gaze ...' - excellent. I love the length of it too; succintly illustrated.
1aleppineThis is so lovely! 'Beneath the cerulean gaze ...' - excellent. I love the length of it too; succintly illustrated.
5/4/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
great piece! totally awesome imagery, wonderfully described. you did a good job on this! keep on writing! btw, yeah, the answer was "moon."
36obsidian katanagreat piece! totally awesome imagery, wonderfully described. you did a good job on this! keep on writing! btw, yeah, the answer was "moon."
5/4/2003 c1 moonmilk
It's so rare to find a very good haiku anymore.
That was startling in its beauty, you have a very good grasp on your form. Keep up your good work (and thank you for your review =)).
It's so rare to find a very good haiku anymore.
That was startling in its beauty, you have a very good grasp on your form. Keep up your good work (and thank you for your review =)).
5/2/2003 c1 17Jade6
Oh... this had such a magic-y feeling to it. I loved the line: "Across the vaulted sky"... I mean what a beautiful image.
Jade
17Jade6Oh... this had such a magic-y feeling to it. I loved the line: "Across the vaulted sky"... I mean what a beautiful image.
Jade
5/1/2003 c1 8glitterjewele
that was amazing! (forgive me for not getting around to reviewing sooner, things have been a bit crazy lately.) it totally took me out of this *insane* world for a minute. kinda felt like i was sitting among the stars, like on a cloud or something. the whole 'night sky as my blanket' comes to mind. "minute pixies," "gentle clouds," "cerulean gaze," were my most favoritest tidbits. nice work! will be back to review other things soon (once my evil midterms are over and i have at least part of my life back. grr). awesome job!
8glitterjewelethat was amazing! (forgive me for not getting around to reviewing sooner, things have been a bit crazy lately.) it totally took me out of this *insane* world for a minute. kinda felt like i was sitting among the stars, like on a cloud or something. the whole 'night sky as my blanket' comes to mind. "minute pixies," "gentle clouds," "cerulean gaze," were my most favoritest tidbits. nice work! will be back to review other things soon (once my evil midterms are over and i have at least part of my life back. grr). awesome job!
5/1/2003 c1 14jaded but alive
its beautiful, i think the term "vaulted sky" is my favorite, though i also liked "they stroke gentle clouds"
14jaded but aliveits beautiful, i think the term "vaulted sky" is my favorite, though i also liked "they stroke gentle clouds"
5/1/2003 c1 The Black Rider
You've created such a beautiful, magical world with this poem. I loved it.
You've created such a beautiful, magical world with this poem. I loved it.
4/30/2003 c1 14reveileb maerdyad
how dare you... it's hightime noon here and you're making me feel all sleepy! ^_^'' of course, delving into that, i have to say this was very effective. never losing that lovely voice for imagery, temptingly lulling. :)
ps. hey, YOUR vocabs are incredible yourself. write more.
14reveileb maerdyadhow dare you... it's hightime noon here and you're making me feel all sleepy! ^_^'' of course, delving into that, i have to say this was very effective. never losing that lovely voice for imagery, temptingly lulling. :)
ps. hey, YOUR vocabs are incredible yourself. write more.
4/30/2003 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
oohh...i really like this. I love the imagery, it makes the whole thing so surreal. Great job, keep writing!
127godawful teen-angst poetryoohh...i really like this. I love the imagery, it makes the whole thing so surreal. Great job, keep writing!