for Transparent as Crystal8/21/2009 c1 Lucy
I can see how your poem relates to "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufock," (and it's not Proofock, by the way) but... the poem just somehow doesn't quite flow. Sorry. Good effort, though.
I can see how your poem relates to "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufock," (and it's not Proofock, by the way) but... the poem just somehow doesn't quite flow. Sorry. Good effort, though.
6/25/2003 c1 
4ColorCrayons
so interesting...no i've never read that...but i did enjoy ur poem anyway. it flowed well and was easy to the eye and mind. good job on this
4ColorCrayonsso interesting...no i've never read that...but i did enjoy ur poem anyway. it flowed well and was easy to the eye and mind. good job on this