for Gone2/21/2004 c1 
24wind up car in motion
^.^ beautiful. I am loving. yay for you, and you get a cookie.
~La Voix
24wind up car in motion^.^ beautiful. I am loving. yay for you, and you get a cookie.
~La Voix
7/24/2003 c1 10Eladriewen
Hey, pretty cool.
Bet you don't remember me. Don't blame you. Where the hell have you been? And what's with changing every contact I had with you? Don't like me no more?
10EladriewenHey, pretty cool.
Bet you don't remember me. Don't blame you. Where the hell have you been? And what's with changing every contact I had with you? Don't like me no more?
6/16/2003 c1 18ni-ru
Really really great poem :D I love the "Whither hither", "Whither thither" combinations, they really set up the next lines nicely. It is a sad poem though :(
18ni-ruReally really great poem :D I love the "Whither hither", "Whither thither" combinations, they really set up the next lines nicely. It is a sad poem though :(
5/12/2003 c1 60dollface and her cancer
All right, so I haven't been on in AGES, ya still love ME?
I agree here, this does flow nicely. I like the rhythm to it. I'd forgotten how much I like your work. Good job - as always - Ele!
60dollface and her cancerAll right, so I haven't been on in AGES, ya still love ME?
I agree here, this does flow nicely. I like the rhythm to it. I'd forgotten how much I like your work. Good job - as always - Ele!
4/28/2003 c1 8RavenPhoenix
this is good
there is kind of a mystery there which is great. i think poems should be mysterious, like a hiddem meaning. great job! one of my faves :)
8RavenPhoenixthis is good
there is kind of a mystery there which is great. i think poems should be mysterious, like a hiddem meaning. great job! one of my faves :)
4/28/2003 c1 98hurtmushroom
Wow, great poem! Loved the imagery and the whole meaning behind it! It's just awesome!
cio, hoellenwauwau
98hurtmushroomWow, great poem! Loved the imagery and the whole meaning behind it! It's just awesome!
cio, hoellenwauwau