for Heart On Paper6/25/2003 c6 
7Renn Ireigh
Just hit 'Empty' and almost started crying. You are so incredibly talented. Just plain... wow.
-Renn
7Renn IreighJust hit 'Empty' and almost started crying. You are so incredibly talented. Just plain... wow.
-Renn
6/7/2003 c5 Angele Raye
THis poem touches me in a special way. I can relate to it on a different level than most of your others. You use the beautiful picture of writing about me in your dreams. That is so wistful(i've never spelt that word before...) and thought provoking to think about someone. Very nice. Best Wishes!
THis poem touches me in a special way. I can relate to it on a different level than most of your others. You use the beautiful picture of writing about me in your dreams. That is so wistful(i've never spelt that word before...) and thought provoking to think about someone. Very nice. Best Wishes!
6/1/2003 c7 37Behind Hidden Doors
A beautiful end to a beautiful series of mushyness. =)
it's nice to say things over again, i guess. yeah, it might sound like a broken record.. but who's to blame but love, right? hitting a whole lot of people with that stupid rusty arrow of his.
i love the simplicity of these poems. realistic and down to earth mushyness. You should write more poetry. =)
Sorry if i haven't been a good fan. you know you're the one that got me into writing, right? yup. At Destiny's Mercy was the first ever story i've read, way back in fanfiction.net. =)
Write more stuff. I especially loved your stories of the avalanche too. =) funny. =)
Keep writing, and keep posting. Till next, God bless!
~Luke
37Behind Hidden DoorsA beautiful end to a beautiful series of mushyness. =)
it's nice to say things over again, i guess. yeah, it might sound like a broken record.. but who's to blame but love, right? hitting a whole lot of people with that stupid rusty arrow of his.
i love the simplicity of these poems. realistic and down to earth mushyness. You should write more poetry. =)
Sorry if i haven't been a good fan. you know you're the one that got me into writing, right? yup. At Destiny's Mercy was the first ever story i've read, way back in fanfiction.net. =)
Write more stuff. I especially loved your stories of the avalanche too. =) funny. =)
Keep writing, and keep posting. Till next, God bless!
~Luke
6/1/2003 c5 Behind Hidden Doors
hmm.. i don't quite connect with this one. =) i'm not quite into the lines "you love me" or such. i find it -weird- to say those three words in succession. =) just my nature, i guess.
love this poem too. =)
hmm.. i don't quite connect with this one. =) i'm not quite into the lines "you love me" or such. i find it -weird- to say those three words in succession. =) just my nature, i guess.
love this poem too. =)
6/1/2003 c4 Behind Hidden Doors
And this is probably my second best in this series. =) it's very short, very simple, but i wonder-
she's caught me many times, looking her way in class, and i quickly jerk my head away. but she must have noticed.. i'm sure.
and i'm sure she must also have noticed the way i act around her..
and that letter.. that letter i wrote for another friend of mine.. where i wrote that i liked her.. i'm sure she read it..
so i wonder what she thinks.. =)
sorry for the sidetrack. =) i love this poem!
And this is probably my second best in this series. =) it's very short, very simple, but i wonder-
she's caught me many times, looking her way in class, and i quickly jerk my head away. but she must have noticed.. i'm sure.
and i'm sure she must also have noticed the way i act around her..
and that letter.. that letter i wrote for another friend of mine.. where i wrote that i liked her.. i'm sure she read it..
so i wonder what she thinks.. =)
sorry for the sidetrack. =) i love this poem!
6/1/2003 c3 Behind Hidden Doors
this one i don't quite understand. but i like it all the same. =)
my (unsure) interpretation of it is that he's never held you, but then you say that if he holds you just once, you'll feel like you've lived a lifetime in his arms. (?)
is that it? if it is, i like the idea. very romantic. I'm a romantic person by nature, so you can't really blame me, can ya? =) Anyways, this is really nice. =) follow up on this, k?
this one i don't quite understand. but i like it all the same. =)
my (unsure) interpretation of it is that he's never held you, but then you say that if he holds you just once, you'll feel like you've lived a lifetime in his arms. (?)
is that it? if it is, i like the idea. very romantic. I'm a romantic person by nature, so you can't really blame me, can ya? =) Anyways, this is really nice. =) follow up on this, k?
6/1/2003 c2 Behind Hidden Doors
shucks!
y'know what the thing is about these poems? They don't rely on the emotion they project. instead, they stir up the emotions already in me, with simple words that i've said before. This doesn't mean you're just another face in this love-struck crowd. It means you know what everyone else in this crowd's been through. Which makes this poem so cool.
This is probably my favorite among these hearts on paper. it's because it hurts, i guess. and I terribly know the feeling. i do. damn, i wish I didn't.
i love the last line. very much. it takes a great deal of strength for me to say that. =)
great poem!
shucks!
y'know what the thing is about these poems? They don't rely on the emotion they project. instead, they stir up the emotions already in me, with simple words that i've said before. This doesn't mean you're just another face in this love-struck crowd. It means you know what everyone else in this crowd's been through. Which makes this poem so cool.
This is probably my favorite among these hearts on paper. it's because it hurts, i guess. and I terribly know the feeling. i do. damn, i wish I didn't.
i love the last line. very much. it takes a great deal of strength for me to say that. =)
great poem!
6/1/2003 c1 Behind Hidden Doors
Hello.
I read all your hearts on paper, and i think that it's nice. very nice. And it's cute. Very cute. I'll review the poems on by one and tell you what I thin, okay? Just do go disappearing!
Ok. =)
To some extent,(pardon the pun) these poems are fairly simple. And that's what i like most about them. Human emotions tend to be simple, yet have the profoundest effect on life. And to simply say the words on paper, words we might not have the courage to say out loud, it's really nice. Maybe coz I know the feeling.. To love someone but to lose all courage to tell her to her face. And i write silly things like these.. things that mean the word to me; coz once, even in my imagination.. I told her. =)
I love "to some extent". it gives a preview of all the more sweet simplicity to come. =)
Hello.
I read all your hearts on paper, and i think that it's nice. very nice. And it's cute. Very cute. I'll review the poems on by one and tell you what I thin, okay? Just do go disappearing!
Ok. =)
To some extent,(pardon the pun) these poems are fairly simple. And that's what i like most about them. Human emotions tend to be simple, yet have the profoundest effect on life. And to simply say the words on paper, words we might not have the courage to say out loud, it's really nice. Maybe coz I know the feeling.. To love someone but to lose all courage to tell her to her face. And i write silly things like these.. things that mean the word to me; coz once, even in my imagination.. I told her. =)
I love "to some extent". it gives a preview of all the more sweet simplicity to come. =)
4/29/2003 c5 1e. riley
I love the way you made it a collection of poems. Like a little anthology of Sarah work.
1e. rileyI love the way you made it a collection of poems. Like a little anthology of Sarah work.
4/28/2003 c1 erin
this is so good! you are so awesome! you are the best writer I know! woo. Yay sarah. If you publish this, I will camp out at the book store just so that I can get the first copy and then I will make you autograph it. wether you want to or not because this is the best stuff I have read since flossie. I mean, come on, no one can out do flossie. no matter you wrote it. because you are a writer. and that is what you do. because you are SO DARN GOOD AT IT!
this is so good! you are so awesome! you are the best writer I know! woo. Yay sarah. If you publish this, I will camp out at the book store just so that I can get the first copy and then I will make you autograph it. wether you want to or not because this is the best stuff I have read since flossie. I mean, come on, no one can out do flossie. no matter you wrote it. because you are a writer. and that is what you do. because you are SO DARN GOOD AT IT!