for Call Me11/17/2005 c1 nickel
thats really good- i especially like the 6th stanza.
thats really good- i especially like the 6th stanza.
7/23/2004 c1 
3Prowling Muse
And loyalty knows little boundaries.. A very endearing piece.. Hope the one on the other line has picked up.
3Prowling MuseAnd loyalty knows little boundaries.. A very endearing piece.. Hope the one on the other line has picked up.
2/24/2004 c1 18Falling For You
Wow...That poem leaves me breathless. It's beautiful! I loved the imagery and I can relate to it. I'm going to add this to my favorites!
18Falling For YouWow...That poem leaves me breathless. It's beautiful! I loved the imagery and I can relate to it. I'm going to add this to my favorites!
11/17/2003 c1 30Whispers Of You
Very nice, A lot of thought and emotion put into this one.. It could probably get a bit confusing but to me it flowed beautifully. I specially like the stanza
"I used to know you so long ago
But you said you had to grow
I've searched for ten thousand years
Only to see you time and time disappear"
That stuck in my mind, but the whole thign was beautiful. well- written, shows the distress of relationships( or rather, the lack of them)
S*O*A*B*H
30Whispers Of YouVery nice, A lot of thought and emotion put into this one.. It could probably get a bit confusing but to me it flowed beautifully. I specially like the stanza
"I used to know you so long ago
But you said you had to grow
I've searched for ten thousand years
Only to see you time and time disappear"
That stuck in my mind, but the whole thign was beautiful. well- written, shows the distress of relationships( or rather, the lack of them)
S*O*A*B*H
7/27/2003 c1 8Nova Spirit
Awsome, awsome poem. I like the meaning and rhyme in it. Please keep up the good work. I will be looking forward to more of your poems.
8Nova SpiritAwsome, awsome poem. I like the meaning and rhyme in it. Please keep up the good work. I will be looking forward to more of your poems.
7/2/2003 c1 3smartygurl729
Two words for you: LOVE IT!
I also like the way you used rhyme, being a poet myself I find it hard to rhyme using the "right"words without the poem sounding odd.I notice some people criticized the rhyming, but I LOVE IT!
~smartygurl729~
3smartygurl729Two words for you: LOVE IT!
I also like the way you used rhyme, being a poet myself I find it hard to rhyme using the "right"words without the poem sounding odd.I notice some people criticized the rhyming, but I LOVE IT!
~smartygurl729~
6/28/2003 c1 1serasivad
I think I'm gonna have to give a copy of that to my boyfriend.
A little suggestion never hurt anybody.
I like how you don't seem to worry too much about rhyming and how the words you favor are in themselves beautiful. For instance, drenched, etched, and faded are all beautiful words whereas soggy, doodled, and weak aren't.
I don't know if that made sense but suffice it to say: It was excellent!
1serasivadI think I'm gonna have to give a copy of that to my boyfriend.
A little suggestion never hurt anybody.
I like how you don't seem to worry too much about rhyming and how the words you favor are in themselves beautiful. For instance, drenched, etched, and faded are all beautiful words whereas soggy, doodled, and weak aren't.
I don't know if that made sense but suffice it to say: It was excellent!
6/23/2003 c1 7sammy loves romeo
o my god this is so true i think that this is a very nice poem now can ya review me
7sammy loves romeoo my god this is so true i think that this is a very nice poem now can ya review me
6/2/2003 c1 Guest
cool, but 2 much focus on trying to rhyme, kinda took away the effect of the whole thing.
cool, but 2 much focus on trying to rhyme, kinda took away the effect of the whole thing.
5/25/2003 c1 62BloodBrother
I dunno, a nice poem, nice idea and stuff, it just seems like you were trying a little too hard to make it all rhyme. Took a little away from the effect of it.
62BloodBrotherI dunno, a nice poem, nice idea and stuff, it just seems like you were trying a little too hard to make it all rhyme. Took a little away from the effect of it.
5/11/2003 c1 Cloudie
Another beautiful poem! ^-^ Your poems are really good. ^-^
Another beautiful poem! ^-^ Your poems are really good. ^-^