for Omega7/22/2004 c1 
210Kelpylion
Oh...loved the totally surreal quality to this. Like being trapped in some sort of vortex.
210KelpylionOh...loved the totally surreal quality to this. Like being trapped in some sort of vortex.
10/22/2003 c1 39Kurare
Very nice. I espceially like the first stanza... 'We, the prisoners of time'; beautiful. Anyway, my favorites are stanzas one and three, but I do love the whole thing. Great job!
39KurareVery nice. I espceially like the first stanza... 'We, the prisoners of time'; beautiful. Anyway, my favorites are stanzas one and three, but I do love the whole thing. Great job!
7/9/2003 c1 1liquor knight
ahahaha, i read it from the bottom. you should try it. it also makes sense that way..
1liquor knightahahaha, i read it from the bottom. you should try it. it also makes sense that way..
7/3/2003 c1 8Moril
Oddly, it reminds me more of a vortex (whirlpool) or a circle then an omega. It's excellent, though. Keep writing!
8MorilOddly, it reminds me more of a vortex (whirlpool) or a circle then an omega. It's excellent, though. Keep writing!
6/2/2003 c1 12All Mighty Terrestrial
Hey, that was cool! Sounds like a monster coming, but instead of The End (gasp!), it's the beginning. I like your style, simple, yet profound. Thanks for the review! (jeez, that was fast...) (grin)
12All Mighty TerrestrialHey, that was cool! Sounds like a monster coming, but instead of The End (gasp!), it's the beginning. I like your style, simple, yet profound. Thanks for the review! (jeez, that was fast...) (grin)
5/27/2003 c1 34curiouzkatt
lol. i have no idea what to say. *reads bio then shakes friend* did you hit yourself on the head or something? anyways i like your poem. sigh! okay. lets be honest! i envy you!1 you're so good at this stuff wah! anyways, thanks for mentioning me in your bio. i'm getting reviews all right... a mailboxful of them and author alerts and chain messages the list goes on... anyway (again) how was your summer? me? i missed promotion yet again. i'm tired of being a white belt! =^-^= gambatte ne!
34curiouzkattlol. i have no idea what to say. *reads bio then shakes friend* did you hit yourself on the head or something? anyways i like your poem. sigh! okay. lets be honest! i envy you!1 you're so good at this stuff wah! anyways, thanks for mentioning me in your bio. i'm getting reviews all right... a mailboxful of them and author alerts and chain messages the list goes on... anyway (again) how was your summer? me? i missed promotion yet again. i'm tired of being a white belt! =^-^= gambatte ne!
5/22/2003 c1 31Modern Poet
Honestly? I liked some of your other poems better, but it was alright. It just sounds like something I've heard before.
31Modern PoetHonestly? I liked some of your other poems better, but it was alright. It just sounds like something I've heard before.
5/19/2003 c1 17Winged One1
I like this poem...the 3rd line of the poem, "We, the prisoners of time" struck me as very interesting, for a reason I can't quite pinpoint...anyway, good job, I like this. winged one
p.s. thanx much for the Review!
17Winged One1I like this poem...the 3rd line of the poem, "We, the prisoners of time" struck me as very interesting, for a reason I can't quite pinpoint...anyway, good job, I like this. winged one
p.s. thanx much for the Review!