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5/17/2003 c1 16kaika switched
Very interesting. I like your writing style (whatever that may be). Keep writing!
5/14/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
Brilliant! A great poem indeed!
5/8/2003 c1 8glitterjewele
o fateful. loved the impending doom feeling you had going through this piece. some of my favorite lines and bits were: "swinging pendulums" (loved the allusion) "the prisoners of time," "rhythm of a beating heart," "an unseen presence stares," and "it has begun," was a great closing line. very nicely written! and please accept my humble apologies for not getting around to you earlier (it was midterm week - ug). kudos!
5/6/2003 c1 51TragedyLovesMisery
Thsi is good! Thanx for reviewing my poems!
5/4/2003 c1 64not sure yet
ineresting, i like it though, well written, beautifully done
5/1/2003 c1 Needa S
Awesome! Great job put together very well. Thanks for your reviews. Keep writing..
5/1/2003 c1 8Shush Don't
I love it! It's powerful and kinda haunting.
4/30/2003 c1 68Princess Mulan
very cool idea!

I like the dark imgary in this one.

great job.
4/30/2003 c1 8Aureya of Chocolate
oh

very interesting...

i can sort of relate a little... just a BIT

but still very good work, keep it up! :)

lotsa luv

jazzo
4/30/2003 c1 16AnnekeRose
A little short for my liking. I think it really needed another four stanza like in the begining to finish it off. Still it's good.
4/29/2003 c1 SerAnonima
PERFECT...VERY WELL PUT TOGETHER...LOVE THE POWER AND PASSION EMBRACED IN SUCH A SMALL POEM...LOVED THE IDEA...VERY VERY GOD...
4/29/2003 c1 15Isay
Wow! It was a very powerful poem. I love your style.

~Isay
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