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8/20/2003 c1 thisisover
^^ cute, good simplicity of feelings
8/18/2003 c1 49recalcitrant
i think your poem was really good. i liked the your used of vocabulary and structure.e r+r my stuff if u want. i suggest "goodbye to you", "hurt" and "this one is called f* you." keep up the good writing because i would love to read more.

peace

recalcitrant
8/8/2003 c1 37Sunflower Philosophy
Very cute... I wish I could speak Chinese so I could read your other ones!

My favorite season is Autumn... I hate the summer (too hot), and Autumn is almost a whole year before I have to worry about summer again! Spring is nice, too, but it has summer looming ahead... I don't mind winter half as much. In fact I kind of like it.

Hm.

As I said, very cute...

m~* Sunflower, anyone?
7/27/2003 c1 laciemn
I like the winter stanza best. *sigh* this is so...nice, i guess. I like^_^
6/24/2003 c1 22Gevo
These haiku are really great... Wish I could write like that...
6/18/2003 c1 96Mitsunaga
I love the seasons, well done.
6/16/2003 c1 36Arynnl
i really liked all these haikus

you're very talented.

keep it up

(sorry i took so long to get back to you, thanks for all the nice reviews)

(^_^)
6/14/2003 c1 200Ashes of a Willow
awesome job! keep it up!
6/12/2003 c1 128Zainab
That was so cute! Very sweet haikus. Beautiful.
5/23/2003 c1 210Kelpylion
Oh, this is so sweet. I really think you captured the feelings of the seasons very well.
5/18/2003 c1 Palanathradion Esgalsirion
That was grea, and true...keep it up!
5/16/2003 c1 35Mime
A nice poem, describing the seasons. I'm very sorry about the SARS virus having such a bad effect on Hong Kong. Hopefully they'll find a cure soon. In the meantime, have hope,and keep writing! ^.^
5/13/2003 c1 41ionlyliveindreams
Hey, I really like this. I like the spring one and the winter one the best. Maybe it's because I like those seasons alot, but anyways, the whole thing is great!

Keep writing

~ionlyliveindreams
5/11/2003 c1 64not sure yet
aw, very pretty and short, love it, excellent job
5/8/2003 c1 4Exclamation
Hey! Here's my first review ever on FictionPress ( I just signed up today, I've put a rubbish Haiku up ). this is a really cool poem, i love everything about it. so cool!
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