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5/7/2003 c1 31Amethyst Haze
Wow Mulan, very beautiful poem! You've captured each season so well. ^_^
5/6/2003 c1 14Zechariah
That was very sweet.
5/5/2003 c1 43Jay Lee
Ah really nice job on all your poems and stuff. I tried to read most of it but I can't seem to read the chinese ones :( I think I'm missing out or something. Off too read more of your stories I suppose. Ah New faovrite author : )
5/5/2003 c1 98hurtmushroom
so cool, loved it!

cio, hoellenwauwau
5/5/2003 c1 19Aftertaste of a Razorblade
Oh. I like these. Beautifully done!
5/4/2003 c1 10Fangelir
Great haiku! Simple, but very meaningful. The season descriptions were lovely. I look forward to your next poem!
5/4/2003 c1 wheresmydopamine
These are so sweet! I like the winter one... Nicely done.
5/2/2003 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
Very nice haikus of the seasons. Saw one place where the syllables went off but other than that, it's not a huge deal and I won't complain about it. Keep writing.

~CT
5/2/2003 c1 42Lady of the Moon
Good poem. I like the idea of it. YOu should write a flowery poem. One maybe that describes the various flowers and plants each season or the condition of a single one each season.

Asta
5/1/2003 c1 35aurias
Very sweet and hopeful. :)
5/1/2003 c1 14jaded but alive
wow! you truly are the queen of haiku! i love these, they overflow with talent.
4/30/2003 c1 122Free-Writer
Wonderful! You have wrote exactly what the four seasons are all about. Friends are what gets us through life.
4/30/2003 c1 26kamikaze899
excellent work! i really liked this.. keep writing ^_^
4/29/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
Yeah, it's beautiful and touching, Mulan! It's great to know someone like you. Thank you.
4/29/2003 c1 15Isay
Aww, that was so lovely! I especially liked the part about winter... Snow is so nice...

Though I also love the part about spring... hopes and joys of new life sprouting... that was so beautiful!

Good job! ^_^

~Isay
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