for Cranberry Juice7/2/2003 c1 
62passing on pixydust outgrown
i dont' get how no one else made the blood connection. it's all too obvious to me.
i was feeling philosopical and shitak so i came by here again, you haven't been posting, but hey i haven't either so we're even. felt like dropping in. and to anyone reading this other than my she'enedra here.
THE POEM IS ABOUT BLOOD AND CUTTING.
geez, and i thought people were actually intelligent. it's a metaphor for crying out loud. ever heard of one?
bah, you have some great reviewers child.
love much, she'endra
~Que ( i'm so reviving the name)
p.s. i'm feeling girly we need to shop.
62passing on pixydust outgrowni dont' get how no one else made the blood connection. it's all too obvious to me.
i was feeling philosopical and shitak so i came by here again, you haven't been posting, but hey i haven't either so we're even. felt like dropping in. and to anyone reading this other than my she'enedra here.
THE POEM IS ABOUT BLOOD AND CUTTING.
geez, and i thought people were actually intelligent. it's a metaphor for crying out loud. ever heard of one?
bah, you have some great reviewers child.
love much, she'endra
~Que ( i'm so reviving the name)
p.s. i'm feeling girly we need to shop.
4/30/2003 c1 Darkangel Rose
I swear you get better and better with every poem. Have I mentioned I love you? My God that was good. This one was a lot more lighthearted, but, y'know, meaningful all the same. I enjoyed it a lot. Lighthearted's good. I have spilled juice on the bus SO many times ... *^^* I can really relate.
I like these two last poems you've posted (i.e. 'Deathless Child' & this) a whole freakin' lot. You never cease to amaze me.
I swear you get better and better with every poem. Have I mentioned I love you? My God that was good. This one was a lot more lighthearted, but, y'know, meaningful all the same. I enjoyed it a lot. Lighthearted's good. I have spilled juice on the bus SO many times ... *^^* I can really relate.
I like these two last poems you've posted (i.e. 'Deathless Child' & this) a whole freakin' lot. You never cease to amaze me.
4/30/2003 c1 64not sure yet
interesting, i like it though, a lil odd, but thats always good, wonderful poem
64not sure yetinteresting, i like it though, a lil odd, but thats always good, wonderful poem
4/30/2003 c1 Abandoned Love
omg, i LOVE cranberry juice! seriously, i'm obsessed with it. it's the best kind of drink ever! ok yeah. ONWARDS to the poem! it's very thought-provoking and it proves to all those big-word-obsessors that simple words can kick mucho ass too. was this review helpful? i doubt it. but that's what i'm here for.
-xoxo molly
omg, i LOVE cranberry juice! seriously, i'm obsessed with it. it's the best kind of drink ever! ok yeah. ONWARDS to the poem! it's very thought-provoking and it proves to all those big-word-obsessors that simple words can kick mucho ass too. was this review helpful? i doubt it. but that's what i'm here for.
-xoxo molly