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6/24/2003 c1 196Damaged
*cries* This is so dark and right up my alley! This was an awesome piece of work, one of your best, in my opinion.

"But as the airy light of moon shifts

The illusion of your prescence does too

And your silhouette no longer appears

Before my lying eyes"

I absolutely LOVE this stanza! It is beautiful and really grabs you! It was the PERFECT ending! (")(^_^)(")
5/12/2003 c1 7mythirdeye
This is utterly beautiful... and very bittersweet. Two very well-deserved thumbs up (and I don't give em out to just anyone). :)
5/4/2003 c1 11Beautiful 'N Bruised
Oh how beautifully heartbreaking, wow. And so true, I mean how many people have deluded themselves in this way.
5/1/2003 c1 11DeeTzy
I love it, I love it, I love it.

It has a very good sense of imagery - 'The dusky moon

Governs the night sky

And in her ethereal light'

It has an eerie bittersweet feel to it that is very catching -

'The illusion of your presence does too

And your silhouette no longer appears'

Your talent is obvious and subtle at the same time. One can do many things with this gift :)

Keep on writing them and for sure I'll keep on reading them.

5/1/2003 c1 26kamikaze899
wow! just beautiful. loved it.. love the way you write. keep writing!

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