for Passing of a gentle wind1/22/2005 c1 
74laughter at the funeral
gentle winds...very good job...although some of the breaking of the lines are a bit awkward...and punctuations are also neded...oh and pls if you have the time...pls do reivew some of my poems...
truly yours...
74laughter at the funeralgentle winds...very good job...although some of the breaking of the lines are a bit awkward...and punctuations are also neded...oh and pls if you have the time...pls do reivew some of my poems...
truly yours...
5/18/2003 c1 7mary.rose.fate
now this one is my fav. i know some of your grammars are wrong but hey i understand your message... now you expressed you're "true feeling" (la lang masulat)! im touch ^^
7mary.rose.fatenow this one is my fav. i know some of your grammars are wrong but hey i understand your message... now you expressed you're "true feeling" (la lang masulat)! im touch ^^
5/12/2003 c1 23Fina Arvanthol
Only one mistake and I'm not even sure if I'm right about it or not- in your line 'A gentle gail to push you forward,' isn't gail supposed to be g-a-l-e? I knew what you meant though and your poem is touching and true. Excellent job and keep up the goodwork.
-Gamer GX
23Fina ArvantholOnly one mistake and I'm not even sure if I'm right about it or not- in your line 'A gentle gail to push you forward,' isn't gail supposed to be g-a-l-e? I knew what you meant though and your poem is touching and true. Excellent job and keep up the goodwork.
-Gamer GX
5/3/2003 c1 43Schizophrenic Doll
this was excellent. simple and elegant. i know sounds corny hehe but it's true. thank you very much for your review and keep on writing.
~Never willing to give into others' beliefs just to fit in...Tyche Shadows~
43Schizophrenic Dollthis was excellent. simple and elegant. i know sounds corny hehe but it's true. thank you very much for your review and keep on writing.
~Never willing to give into others' beliefs just to fit in...Tyche Shadows~
5/1/2003 c1 30Scott St. Hilaire
Wow, optomistic, rhythmic, genuinely inspiring. Good job.
R&R some of my work sometime plz!
30Scott St. HilaireWow, optomistic, rhythmic, genuinely inspiring. Good job.
R&R some of my work sometime plz!