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1/22/2005 c1 74laughter at the funeral
gentle winds...very good job...although some of the breaking of the lines are a bit awkward...and punctuations are also neded...oh and pls if you have the time...pls do reivew some of my poems...

truly yours...
5/18/2003 c1 7mary.rose.fate
now this one is my fav. i know some of your grammars are wrong but hey i understand your message... now you expressed you're "true feeling" (la lang masulat)! im touch ^^
5/12/2003 c1 23Fina Arvanthol
Only one mistake and I'm not even sure if I'm right about it or not- in your line 'A gentle gail to push you forward,' isn't gail supposed to be g-a-l-e? I knew what you meant though and your poem is touching and true. Excellent job and keep up the goodwork.

-Gamer GX
5/12/2003 c1 8Pace
this was really pretty,i like.
5/4/2003 c1 Needa S
Beautiful..Awesome piece..Keep writing!
5/3/2003 c1 43Schizophrenic Doll
this was excellent. simple and elegant. i know sounds corny hehe but it's true. thank you very much for your review and keep on writing.

~Never willing to give into others' beliefs just to fit in...Tyche Shadows~
5/1/2003 c1 30Scott St. Hilaire
Wow, optomistic, rhythmic, genuinely inspiring. Good job.

R&R some of my work sometime plz!

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