
6/27/2004 c1 huntressshi
i really like this story so far and hope to read more
i really like this story so far and hope to read more
10/19/2003 c1 Nikki
-y'ello-
-y'ello-
8/30/2003 c1 Jaede Loriele Alyn
Beautiful! Gorgeous! Love it! Um, did you make up the elven language or did you get it from Tolkein (he's the one that did that right?) Anyway, don't laugh at me okay.
Jaede
Beautiful! Gorgeous! Love it! Um, did you make up the elven language or did you get it from Tolkein (he's the one that did that right?) Anyway, don't laugh at me okay.
Jaede
7/17/2003 c1
29Anandria
Well, I think this is really good! What's the thing with the dude with the concealing charm? I like it, and I think you had best continue this or SUFFER MY WRATH! heh heh, j/k . . . I really like it, though! Continue, onegai!
Ja ne, SMP-san!

Well, I think this is really good! What's the thing with the dude with the concealing charm? I like it, and I think you had best continue this or SUFFER MY WRATH! heh heh, j/k . . . I really like it, though! Continue, onegai!
Ja ne, SMP-san!
7/15/2003 c1 becac
FINISH FINISH FINISH! O , LPEAZ FINISH WHEN U R DONE WITH "A GIRLS FATE"...Lplease
I WILL WORSHIP U! please
~*ace*~
FINISH FINISH FINISH! O , LPEAZ FINISH WHEN U R DONE WITH "A GIRLS FATE"...Lplease
I WILL WORSHIP U! please
~*ace*~
7/6/2003 c1
4Framage
o, i promise that i will read your story later, i just wanted to say that i think it \s really cool that you like vash! just reaching out to another vash lover, i meanmy sn's i \lvvash for crying out loud! just because you like vash, i deem you cool!

o, i promise that i will read your story later, i just wanted to say that i think it \s really cool that you like vash! just reaching out to another vash lover, i meanmy sn's i \lvvash for crying out loud! just because you like vash, i deem you cool!
7/2/2003 c1 IC HOT
I really like the chapter and the charitorazation is ausme u seem to have the wrighting thing down ^_^
I really like the chapter and the charitorazation is ausme u seem to have the wrighting thing down ^_^
6/24/2003 c1 Dark Chobit
This story is good, too! Don't worry, most authors out there (including me) like to write other stories to help relieve writer's block. I have writer's block on all my stories right now! :P But, for me it's also laziness. Keep up the good work!
This story is good, too! Don't worry, most authors out there (including me) like to write other stories to help relieve writer's block. I have writer's block on all my stories right now! :P But, for me it's also laziness. Keep up the good work!
6/20/2003 c1 yrael
i love this, hints at being as intoxicating as "a girl's fate", with an undeniably mischevious twist... anxiously waiting to read more
i love this, hints at being as intoxicating as "a girl's fate", with an undeniably mischevious twist... anxiously waiting to read more
5/30/2003 c1 Lady Arabian Knight
Good beginning! Please I would love to read of this story! Update if you can! PLease write more!
Good beginning! Please I would love to read of this story! Update if you can! PLease write more!
5/2/2003 c1 becca
now...i was wondering... is that ever going to turn into a romance... cause it is good and you should finish it :).. GREAT job!
-b-
now...i was wondering... is that ever going to turn into a romance... cause it is good and you should finish it :).. GREAT job!
-b-