for You and I12/28/2003 c1 
43James Rain
Time after time I am simple amazed at your writing. Your poetry is simple the best I've seen not published. The first two stanzas were so clear in there statement. I really felt something for the narrator and the subject. Change is important, but challenging. Especially in relationships, which is a problem we all face. I love the universality of it. I'm very happy to have read this.
43James RainTime after time I am simple amazed at your writing. Your poetry is simple the best I've seen not published. The first two stanzas were so clear in there statement. I really felt something for the narrator and the subject. Change is important, but challenging. Especially in relationships, which is a problem we all face. I love the universality of it. I'm very happy to have read this.
7/31/2003 c1 13XxDragon Princess NikkixX
"Your soul,
so the like the dissipating remnants of a rainbow
under the relentless glare of the setting sun. . ."
I really loved that line. It sounded so beautiful. This is a wonderful piece of work. I really liked it. Your poetry is so unique in a sense that i just can't fgure out. I think it is because i have never read anything so good on this website before. You are a terrific writer. Honestly.
13XxDragon Princess NikkixX"Your soul,
so the like the dissipating remnants of a rainbow
under the relentless glare of the setting sun. . ."
I really loved that line. It sounded so beautiful. This is a wonderful piece of work. I really liked it. Your poetry is so unique in a sense that i just can't fgure out. I think it is because i have never read anything so good on this website before. You are a terrific writer. Honestly.
6/26/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
All I can say is that you have a way with words. Your writing style is brilliant. I loved the first stanza especially. Great work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenAll I can say is that you have a way with words. Your writing style is brilliant. I loved the first stanza especially. Great work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
6/1/2003 c1 39squeak
i really love this poem. the words flow together so well, like they are all one dream. and i love the third stanza. i can relate some people to that scenario and you describe the feeling well. again, i loved it.
-jessie
39squeaki really love this poem. the words flow together so well, like they are all one dream. and i love the third stanza. i can relate some people to that scenario and you describe the feeling well. again, i loved it.
-jessie
5/20/2003 c1 24lighted eagle
i've just had an english exam...yeah, i don't know where that came from...hmm...nah, cool poem...i like it, and i especially like the
"as it spoke with the wind, while we soared, the music of the eagle's cry dancing in our ears." part.
really, really, really good (unlike this review :D) bye for now.
24lighted eaglei've just had an english exam...yeah, i don't know where that came from...hmm...nah, cool poem...i like it, and i especially like the
"as it spoke with the wind, while we soared, the music of the eagle's cry dancing in our ears." part.
really, really, really good (unlike this review :D) bye for now.
5/11/2003 c1 64not sure yet
seriously, im in awe of this piece, its wildly beautiful, i love it, esp that last line there, extremely powerful and the whole flow to it is just wow, beautifully done, truly
64not sure yetseriously, im in awe of this piece, its wildly beautiful, i love it, esp that last line there, extremely powerful and the whole flow to it is just wow, beautifully done, truly
5/8/2003 c1 196Damaged
I can relate to this. I hate it how relationships will be almost perfect. . but it'll change .. just like you've written!
196DamagedI can relate to this. I hate it how relationships will be almost perfect. . but it'll change .. just like you've written!
5/7/2003 c1 1aleppine
... perfect.
I hate this feeling.
Such a silver, silver poem, propped up on sheer wings that could be torn by a little sigh. Memory is like this. 'We used to sing a different song' - excellent. I love your work. It's so inspiring, makes me wanna write. But can't. Or shouldn't. Stupid bloody exams. Hmph.
1aleppine... perfect.
I hate this feeling.
Such a silver, silver poem, propped up on sheer wings that could be torn by a little sigh. Memory is like this. 'We used to sing a different song' - excellent. I love your work. It's so inspiring, makes me wanna write. But can't. Or shouldn't. Stupid bloody exams. Hmph.
5/5/2003 c1 39TL Demeter
unfortunatelly, this is the first time I'm reading this... and that makes it kinda better. it is a beautiful poem, thank you so much for reposting it!
TL Demeter
39TL Demeterunfortunatelly, this is the first time I'm reading this... and that makes it kinda better. it is a beautiful poem, thank you so much for reposting it!
TL Demeter
5/2/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
Why are you doing here when you're in the middle of exams? Go revised!
::tee hee::
overreacted.
Great poem, by the way. You never fail to impress me, ALL the time.
36Psycho-kyugurlWhy are you doing here when you're in the middle of exams? Go revised!
::tee hee::
overreacted.
Great poem, by the way. You never fail to impress me, ALL the time.
5/2/2003 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
Beautiful...just beautiful...I feel like an amoeba next to you, lol. Oh, end of May your site will be up? I won't be here T_T. Anyway, you have some lovely lines in this one. Gives me a nice feeling. Keep it up.~CT
43Carter TachikawaBeautiful...just beautiful...I feel like an amoeba next to you, lol. Oh, end of May your site will be up? I won't be here T_T. Anyway, you have some lovely lines in this one. Gives me a nice feeling. Keep it up.~CT