11/10/2003 c1 185decayedmatter
this is wonderful... really good. it's kinda gothic in a sense... i like it. i like dark poems... you should see some of mine... haha...
this is wonderful... really good. it's kinda gothic in a sense... i like it. i like dark poems... you should see some of mine... haha...
6/16/2003 c1 38LoV3lee
wow! i can really relate to the lust thing. but the price...wow. datz scary. specially since i hav a fear of blood, but datz not the point. that was really good. that was really...i duno...powerful? im not good w/ words. i jus got a sudden rush of feelings jus from readin that. good job. keep it up!
wow! i can really relate to the lust thing. but the price...wow. datz scary. specially since i hav a fear of blood, but datz not the point. that was really good. that was really...i duno...powerful? im not good w/ words. i jus got a sudden rush of feelings jus from readin that. good job. keep it up!
5/16/2003 c1 12Vuelo
That's awesome. I wonder if peopel that only go with lust DO feel like that... i hope so lol
thnx for the reveiw!
-Courtney
That's awesome. I wonder if peopel that only go with lust DO feel like that... i hope so lol
thnx for the reveiw!
-Courtney
5/16/2003 c1 10Bbyblue222
Your poem is disturbing to read since it's so graphic, yet it's true. Good work.
Your poem is disturbing to read since it's so graphic, yet it's true. Good work.