for Short by the size5/5/2003 c1 
13NuttyGummy
I already told you this but I'll say it again, these are good.
You are very talented in the poetry area.
13NuttyGummyI already told you this but I'll say it again, these are good.
You are very talented in the poetry area.
5/4/2003 c1 36Rhia
First, thanks a lot for the reviews. I really like reviews, dosen't everybody? Thanks really.
I'm blown away. wow. So many things to say...hm. okay. on w/it.
" The End-Times"-u definitely got an A on it. If u didn't, sue the teacher, seriously. I loved the way u expressed the sky..."a tarnished crystal" and the beginning lines, "dew's sweet kiss", real expressive.
"The Picasso Poem"-hm...good ideas throughout " Chain of season." part was one. Also the end part. "I (We) drift away." good ending.
" Blind Warrior"-ah! Too cool. "I am alone, None left alive, Except one. I hear his soft retreat, In my mind." Esp. the 'none left alive, except one' part really struck the chord. heh heh heh. Okay...moving on...
" God's echo" I give this the most creative poem in this whole group. I love the echoing words part, hm, wonder why it echos...j/k. *dripping sarcasm* the " I see you live, live I see you die. die" is creepy, but makes sense. Keep it up!
"The Last Pirates"-Like the "O'er the land." the 'O'er' makes it look so hm...like a real poem. u kno, how poems in books always do that, add apostrophes blah, blah, blah. uh-oh ramblin'.
36RhiaFirst, thanks a lot for the reviews. I really like reviews, dosen't everybody? Thanks really.
I'm blown away. wow. So many things to say...hm. okay. on w/it.
" The End-Times"-u definitely got an A on it. If u didn't, sue the teacher, seriously. I loved the way u expressed the sky..."a tarnished crystal" and the beginning lines, "dew's sweet kiss", real expressive.
"The Picasso Poem"-hm...good ideas throughout " Chain of season." part was one. Also the end part. "I (We) drift away." good ending.
" Blind Warrior"-ah! Too cool. "I am alone, None left alive, Except one. I hear his soft retreat, In my mind." Esp. the 'none left alive, except one' part really struck the chord. heh heh heh. Okay...moving on...
" God's echo" I give this the most creative poem in this whole group. I love the echoing words part, hm, wonder why it echos...j/k. *dripping sarcasm* the " I see you live, live I see you die. die" is creepy, but makes sense. Keep it up!
"The Last Pirates"-Like the "O'er the land." the 'O'er' makes it look so hm...like a real poem. u kno, how poems in books always do that, add apostrophes blah, blah, blah. uh-oh ramblin'.