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1/11/2004 c1 28frugale
This was great. A pleonasm, a metaphor- you can make something become so noble with your wording! Great haiku(s).
7/4/2003 c1 lainxauber
Oh, that's so beautiful! I can't explain what it is about your haiku that truely touches me.
6/17/2003 c1 128Zainab
beautiful! Love the second line
6/14/2003 c1 unforeseen
Beautiful work, Psycho! You write so well. I sware, you're like a writing idol to me. =) One day, MAYBE, I'll be half as good as you are, but by then, we'll all be dead and gone, so there's no hope! ^_^ Well, great job, this was really awesome. If you haven't considered publishing your work, THEN CONSIDER IT! Keep writing!

-Euro-=-
6/14/2003 c1 200Ashes of a Willow
great job!
6/13/2003 c1 37Sunflower Philosophy
We just did a poem called "Daffodils" in English this year... ugh, what's the name of that poet! I don't remember. But it's the reason I checked this one out, too- I love the controversy- the stars, cupped in fragile lone petals... only that shapes the summer. I say, once again- beautiful!

m~* Sunflower, anyone?
6/6/2003 c1 34Smoky Bear
again... really beautiful... daffodils are a lovely flower and your depiction is perfect
6/1/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
Lovely. I loved the line "Cupped in fragile lone petals." Beautiful imagery. Keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*
5/21/2003 c1 8glitterjewele
*sigh* this is quite lovely! i really got this feeling of a summer breeze . . . which is always nice. :) the combination of stars and flower petals was ingenious and creative and i loved it. very original. although i really loved the intricacies of the first two lines, my favorite was "shaping the summer" because . . . actually, i'm not entirely sure why, it just was. :P i guess it made me conjure up something of an unearthly image . . . beautiful! fantastic work! kudos!
5/17/2003 c1 35Mime
Yet another good poem. I promise to read ALL of your haiku when I get the chance!
5/14/2003 c1 Gone23123
I luv your poem~ it shapes the perfect image of a summer daffodil in my mind
5/12/2003 c1 51Lieschen
I can't remember what daffodils look like but you have certainly put a beautiful picture in my mind with such perfect words...

ELise
5/12/2003 c1 26kamikaze899
beautifully written..
5/10/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
Beautiful work. But with your talent, I wouldn't expect any less from you.

~Heart of the Sword
5/9/2003 c1 20Deadwind
Beautiful...
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