for Daffodils5/7/2003 c1 The Black Rider
Your writing is so heart-warming and beautiful. This is no exception. I loved it. You're one of the best.
Your writing is so heart-warming and beautiful. This is no exception. I loved it. You're one of the best.
5/7/2003 c1 
72CancerianQueen
Wow! That's written so well! I love it. It has a nice flow to it. Well done.
Keep writing,
Vnomi. :)
72CancerianQueenWow! That's written so well! I love it. It has a nice flow to it. Well done.
Keep writing,
Vnomi. :)
5/6/2003 c1 74wonky donkey
Thats truly a spectacular Haiku.
I like how you say "cupped" in petals.
Great job.
Have I already reviewed this?
74wonky donkeyThats truly a spectacular Haiku.
I like how you say "cupped" in petals.
Great job.
Have I already reviewed this?
5/5/2003 c1 43Jay Lee
Ah just got done reading alot of your stuff. You are really good. Keep it up. : ) too good to leave you alone so you are on my favorite's list.
43Jay LeeAh just got done reading alot of your stuff. You are really good. Keep it up. : ) too good to leave you alone so you are on my favorite's list.
5/5/2003 c1 Wonky Donkey
Shaping the summer.to true.
I miss them.
I hate Texas
Shaping the summer.to true.
I miss them.
I hate Texas
5/4/2003 c1 68Princess Mulan
This is so sweet and wonderful!
stars astral... how beautiful and lovely. You made a lovely picture here
I really love it.
68Princess MulanThis is so sweet and wonderful!
stars astral... how beautiful and lovely. You made a lovely picture here
I really love it.
5/4/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
great piece with some nice imagery as well. you can really create wonderful, vivid images in my mind. good job on this! keep writing!
36obsidian katanagreat piece with some nice imagery as well. you can really create wonderful, vivid images in my mind. good job on this! keep writing!
5/4/2003 c1 Slyphie Andrella
I like how ya described daffodils
'Like astral of stars' the yellowness I suppose
'Cupped in fragile lone petals' Does it only have one petal? Oh wait - 'petalS'
'Shaping the summer' The brightness of the sun and the yellowness of it bring summer to my heart. Heartwarming.
Beautiful!
I like how ya described daffodils
'Like astral of stars' the yellowness I suppose
'Cupped in fragile lone petals' Does it only have one petal? Oh wait - 'petalS'
'Shaping the summer' The brightness of the sun and the yellowness of it bring summer to my heart. Heartwarming.
Beautiful!
5/3/2003 c1 99Myra Kilgore
I love it...is makes me miss my house because we have a lot of daffodils in the yard during the summer
99Myra KilgoreI love it...is makes me miss my house because we have a lot of daffodils in the yard during the summer