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4/17/2004 c1 47Saiai
I really don't know what to say other than I liked it. It grabs my attention.
1/30/2004 c1 54ByFireAndMoonlight
yeah I know how this feels too, I'm always letting everyone down, I didn't make dinner right, or I forgot this and that, or I got a B on my report card, It's enough to drive one insane!
6/14/2003 c1 30light of middle earth
M I like this- captures the idea well and the idea of penance to an infalliable creature who is at the same time falliable due to an inability to forgive, or am i reading too deep :)

Thx for review,

McD
5/28/2003 c1 Shannon
Hey Jen, I saw the link to this on ur profile, so i decided to come here and read ur stuff. This was a very good poem.
5/27/2003 c1 Caring Heart sorry too lazy to log in
it's good, it needs a lil' bit of help but not a lot...it's an over all good poem, keep up the great work.

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