for Intrigue12/21/2009 c14 
2bubublacz
I agree with you one the concubine-wife part. Gosh, you should really write a philosophy book or something...
2bubublaczI agree with you one the concubine-wife part. Gosh, you should really write a philosophy book or something...
12/21/2009 c11 bubublacz
I really, really like Aiden. My eyes widened at that little inkling of info bout her.
I really, really like Aiden. My eyes widened at that little inkling of info bout her.
12/21/2009 c10 bubublacz
'save the innocent and keep justice.' Those kinds of people only die an early death. That line just made me smile. Your summary doesn't do justice to your story, just so you know. I've also realized that I greatly admire your heroine. It seems to me that whatever situation she'll be in, she'll walk away from it with dignity, whether ending up dead or not, which gives me great comfort. I idolize her already!
'save the innocent and keep justice.' Those kinds of people only die an early death. That line just made me smile. Your summary doesn't do justice to your story, just so you know. I've also realized that I greatly admire your heroine. It seems to me that whatever situation she'll be in, she'll walk away from it with dignity, whether ending up dead or not, which gives me great comfort. I idolize her already!
12/21/2009 c7 bubublacz
I have to say that I'm greatly enjoying your story. At first I thought it was just one of those common pirate stories, but it ain't. I almost got dissuaded when I didn't see the Romance genre as the genre of your story. But I'm glad, I stuck to it. I like the way you act. I also like the mood of your story, dark but has a very deep feeling to it. I'm entranced by your story!
I have to say that I'm greatly enjoying your story. At first I thought it was just one of those common pirate stories, but it ain't. I almost got dissuaded when I didn't see the Romance genre as the genre of your story. But I'm glad, I stuck to it. I like the way you act. I also like the mood of your story, dark but has a very deep feeling to it. I'm entranced by your story!
12/18/2009 c24 Ederra
This is such a great story. Hands down, one of the best I've read so far. Personally, I don't think that you need to rate it as 'R'. Yeah, I know it has got a dark theme, but I've read worse. It doesn't have that much coarse language and it doesn't have any sexual scenes either. But that's just my opinion...
If you do get it published, tell me! I might buy a copy. Although I do think the ending was quite abrupt. And as for titles, the best I can do is along the lines of:
All are human. All is not what it seems.
and
Black Beauty
-Innocence
This is such a great story. Hands down, one of the best I've read so far. Personally, I don't think that you need to rate it as 'R'. Yeah, I know it has got a dark theme, but I've read worse. It doesn't have that much coarse language and it doesn't have any sexual scenes either. But that's just my opinion...
If you do get it published, tell me! I might buy a copy. Although I do think the ending was quite abrupt. And as for titles, the best I can do is along the lines of:
All are human. All is not what it seems.
and
Black Beauty
-Innocence
10/18/2009 c24 Chocorange888
This story is quite amazing. I'm chinese as well and so I'm very glad that you used some very good culture referenced. It took me a while to get the meaning of the traditional meaning of romance, but it was great :) Thank you very much!
This story is quite amazing. I'm chinese as well and so I'm very glad that you used some very good culture referenced. It took me a while to get the meaning of the traditional meaning of romance, but it was great :) Thank you very much!
10/18/2009 c13 Dwindling Fire
coolio chapter xD
did u say ppl act wierd to you coz ur chinese? are people that rascist in...u liv in america ryt?
btw, is nate gonna be in the stori any more or nah? i like him :D
coolio chapter xD
did u say ppl act wierd to you coz ur chinese? are people that rascist in...u liv in america ryt?
btw, is nate gonna be in the stori any more or nah? i like him :D