for Intrigue5/21/2003 c3 Oh-are-ay-en-gee-ee
Very interesting fic. I'd love to read more about Melody and Tempest. (Interesting choice of name for one of your main characters).
Very interesting fic. I'd love to read more about Melody and Tempest. (Interesting choice of name for one of your main characters).
5/19/2003 c3 
4Shahrazad
I love this story. It is so cool. Please continue to write as fast as you can cos i want to find out more!1
4ShahrazadI love this story. It is so cool. Please continue to write as fast as you can cos i want to find out more!1
5/16/2003 c3 3Artemis the Brave
I think this story is going really well. There is definately great potential if you just keep writing. I love "Aiden's" character. Strong heroines are too far and between around here! Keep writing!
3Artemis the BraveI think this story is going really well. There is definately great potential if you just keep writing. I love "Aiden's" character. Strong heroines are too far and between around here! Keep writing!
5/16/2003 c3 4unseenbreeze
Wonderful. I love the PoV's. What is 'Aiden's' real name, I wonder. That's about it. Keep writing. Bravo.
4unseenbreezeWonderful. I love the PoV's. What is 'Aiden's' real name, I wonder. That's about it. Keep writing. Bravo.
5/16/2003 c3 11Crystal Teardrop
Hi! Me again! I really like this story, and the way it's going. Umm, wonderful writing, great character development. I didn't like this chapter as much. Too much stating of facts in a way that isn't compatible with the writing style. incorporate the things in, like the whole "aura of confidence" don't say it, show it. But otherwise, i liked it! Keep it up!
11Crystal TeardropHi! Me again! I really like this story, and the way it's going. Umm, wonderful writing, great character development. I didn't like this chapter as much. Too much stating of facts in a way that isn't compatible with the writing style. incorporate the things in, like the whole "aura of confidence" don't say it, show it. But otherwise, i liked it! Keep it up!
5/10/2003 c2 Crystal Teardrop
*applause* i like it! when are they going to find out that she's a girl? will there be a romance? triangles are good. Dom, Aiden and Tempest...i'd like to see that romance. thanx 4 reviewing my stories
*applause* i like it! when are they going to find out that she's a girl? will there be a romance? triangles are good. Dom, Aiden and Tempest...i'd like to see that romance. thanx 4 reviewing my stories
5/3/2003 c1 11Crystal Teardrop
Good, good! Definitely on my fave list! The plot is a little cliche, but the way ur writing it, it isn't. Characters are good, plot it pretty good...keep it up and keep updating!
11Crystal TeardropGood, good! Definitely on my fave list! The plot is a little cliche, but the way ur writing it, it isn't. Characters are good, plot it pretty good...keep it up and keep updating!