for Death's Warrior6/7/2005 c11 
59Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys
I really lke this story, it is great. It is like 2 stories going on at the same time, and it makes sense aswell. You have a lot of potential and this is an amazing story. I look forward to your updates in the future. R&R mi stuff and i'll return the favour ^-^
59Sacred-Phoenix-NephthysI really lke this story, it is great. It is like 2 stories going on at the same time, and it makes sense aswell. You have a lot of potential and this is an amazing story. I look forward to your updates in the future. R&R mi stuff and i'll return the favour ^-^
6/7/2005 c8 Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys
Great few chapters, this story is great and i think i know where it is going, i may be wrong so i won't say. But i like your use of dreams and thoughts in the story, it makes it all the more enjoyable to read ^_^
Great few chapters, this story is great and i think i know where it is going, i may be wrong so i won't say. But i like your use of dreams and thoughts in the story, it makes it all the more enjoyable to read ^_^
6/7/2005 c5 Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys
Good Good, i like this whole idea of a Blade school. It sounds kool ^_^I will review every few chapters now, i LOVE this story so far ^_^
Good Good, i like this whole idea of a Blade school. It sounds kool ^_^I will review every few chapters now, i LOVE this story so far ^_^
6/7/2005 c2 Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys
OOOooOI liked this chapter, i didnt really get it, but i assume i will l8er on in the story. Geat job, ^_^
OOOooOI liked this chapter, i didnt really get it, but i assume i will l8er on in the story. Geat job, ^_^
6/7/2005 c1 Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys
"After all, magic was but a myth in his world… Hmm… or was it?"I LOVED THAT LINE ! It is so true,, good chapter for an opening. Starting a new story can be irritating, but u did it well. I like this story, really i do ^_^
"After all, magic was but a myth in his world… Hmm… or was it?"I LOVED THAT LINE ! It is so true,, good chapter for an opening. Starting a new story can be irritating, but u did it well. I like this story, really i do ^_^
12/29/2003 c1 5R.C.Polk
I like the introduction to this character; one of the best introductions I have read on fictionpress. I look forward to reading more.
Adjournment,
R.C. Polk
5R.C.PolkI like the introduction to this character; one of the best introductions I have read on fictionpress. I look forward to reading more.
Adjournment,
R.C. Polk
6/13/2003 c3 54Werecat99
So far I like it. It's creepy and captivating. And this dream sequence is absolutely thrilling.
Good work.
54Werecat99So far I like it. It's creepy and captivating. And this dream sequence is absolutely thrilling.
Good work.
6/5/2003 c7 10DarkSorceress
Another good chapter. Not much that I can say, considering your chapter sizes are small. Keep writing.
10DarkSorceressAnother good chapter. Not much that I can say, considering your chapter sizes are small. Keep writing.
5/27/2003 c6 5R.C.Polk
Don't go all 24 on us and make a cliffhanger at every end. A little bit of an engaging story. Keep the chapters coming.
Future Emperor of Iraq,
R.C. Polk
5R.C.PolkDon't go all 24 on us and make a cliffhanger at every end. A little bit of an engaging story. Keep the chapters coming.
Future Emperor of Iraq,
R.C. Polk
5/21/2003 c6 10DarkSorceress
O, ah.
This story gets more and more interesting with every chapter.
Keep up the good work!
10DarkSorceressO, ah.
This story gets more and more interesting with every chapter.
Keep up the good work!