for The Devil's Puppet11/26/2011 c10 Marie
Wow, your story is really good though it reminds me a lot of Nick Joaquin's Mayday Eve. Aside from that, I think that it's really great that you're writing about the olden times in the Philiippines. I hope you update soon and write some more:)
Wow, your story is really good though it reminds me a lot of Nick Joaquin's Mayday Eve. Aside from that, I think that it's really great that you're writing about the olden times in the Philiippines. I hope you update soon and write some more:)
2/18/2005 c1 
6Mephi
Oh my dear Lord. I love this. It is absolutly fantstic. Has a bit of that 'Faust' feel to it. Absolutly amazing. I've read through the 11 chapters, but i haven't been capable of reviewing it, and for that I am deeply sorry.
But really, you have a lot of talent, this story is quite amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next, because our dear little Agueda must have done SOMETHING to end up in jail. heh
6MephiOh my dear Lord. I love this. It is absolutly fantstic. Has a bit of that 'Faust' feel to it. Absolutly amazing. I've read through the 11 chapters, but i haven't been capable of reviewing it, and for that I am deeply sorry.
But really, you have a lot of talent, this story is quite amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next, because our dear little Agueda must have done SOMETHING to end up in jail. heh
7/8/2003 c2 kate
hm... i see the influence of macbeth in this chapter. "turn, hellhound, turn!" double talk. interesting. why not include what macbeth said when he found out lady macbeth died? "tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow creeps in this petty face from day to day to the last syllable fo recorded time. . ."
by using the term senora, does that mean agueda is/was married? senorita is used for younger women, right? and another thing. i had no idea how the cell really looked like. perhaps more description? aside from that, it was flawless. ha-ha.
kate
hm... i see the influence of macbeth in this chapter. "turn, hellhound, turn!" double talk. interesting. why not include what macbeth said when he found out lady macbeth died? "tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow creeps in this petty face from day to day to the last syllable fo recorded time. . ."
by using the term senora, does that mean agueda is/was married? senorita is used for younger women, right? and another thing. i had no idea how the cell really looked like. perhaps more description? aside from that, it was flawless. ha-ha.
kate
7/8/2003 c1 kate
i can't believe you never told me about this creation! well, i checked your grammar. it was all right. you loved using the word, for, though. yes. much has changed. definitely. wonderfully written, nevertheless.
kate
i can't believe you never told me about this creation! well, i checked your grammar. it was all right. you loved using the word, for, though. yes. much has changed. definitely. wonderfully written, nevertheless.
kate
6/9/2003 c10 Kala
Ohh! Upload next chappie asap~
Ohh! Upload next chappie asap~
6/9/2003 c11 tesuka- chan
hey, am i the only one reviewing for this fic?
*looks around at deserted room, heard only crickets singing outside*
Hahaha... joke. ^_^ Oh well, their loss! ;p *grins sheepishly* i dunno... just blame the forbidden thoughts on jetlag. (minnie me: ha! After 2 weeks? puhlez!) *bonks minnie me* EHEHEHE... aherm.
Anyway, so that Gav... HE'S the lecherous one... hm. Interesting. To tell you the truth, I'm getting kind of confused here. Well, I'll just figure it out. Too many characters...
Well, other than that, great chapter! explains Gavrilo a bit. ^_^ Well, keep it going! see ya! ;p
p.s. totally reminds me of Noli! ~_^
hey, am i the only one reviewing for this fic?
*looks around at deserted room, heard only crickets singing outside*
Hahaha... joke. ^_^ Oh well, their loss! ;p *grins sheepishly* i dunno... just blame the forbidden thoughts on jetlag. (minnie me: ha! After 2 weeks? puhlez!) *bonks minnie me* EHEHEHE... aherm.
Anyway, so that Gav... HE'S the lecherous one... hm. Interesting. To tell you the truth, I'm getting kind of confused here. Well, I'll just figure it out. Too many characters...
Well, other than that, great chapter! explains Gavrilo a bit. ^_^ Well, keep it going! see ya! ;p
p.s. totally reminds me of Noli! ~_^
6/2/2003 c9 tesuka- chan
Interesting chapter. Only one thing though... he's 13! Last time i checked, 13-yr old boys are still playing beyblades and computer games. I don't think they'd think of sex at that age. Getting curious about the female anatomy, maybe, but not the entire thing yet. Unless that's one lecherous kid. His ego must be the size of titanic. ;p
Anyway, despite that, great writing as usual. ^_^ Curious story about that Enzo boy. ;p Well, keep it up! Hehehe... laterz!
Interesting chapter. Only one thing though... he's 13! Last time i checked, 13-yr old boys are still playing beyblades and computer games. I don't think they'd think of sex at that age. Getting curious about the female anatomy, maybe, but not the entire thing yet. Unless that's one lecherous kid. His ego must be the size of titanic. ;p
Anyway, despite that, great writing as usual. ^_^ Curious story about that Enzo boy. ;p Well, keep it up! Hehehe... laterz!
5/28/2003 c8 tesuka- chan
WHOA. Twisted version of May Day Eve. Hell, Rosa, if i didn't know that you wrote this, i would've thought that Nick Joaquin decided to change his story himself! This is very well written and the plot is good... i suppose the remains of Noli got to ya, eh? *chuckles* Very nice. ^_^
I totally love the wording. Of course, I wouldn't expect anything less from you, with grammar and everything else. Couldn't wait to find out how she ended up in prison... and i supposed all this will end up tragically like most Filipino novels? Teeheehee... i can see it now. However, the suspense is killing me and you HAVE to update soon! i like this better than the other one, to tell you the truth. (Patriotic, ain't I?)
Eh, keep it up! great writing! ^_^ ja!
WHOA. Twisted version of May Day Eve. Hell, Rosa, if i didn't know that you wrote this, i would've thought that Nick Joaquin decided to change his story himself! This is very well written and the plot is good... i suppose the remains of Noli got to ya, eh? *chuckles* Very nice. ^_^
I totally love the wording. Of course, I wouldn't expect anything less from you, with grammar and everything else. Couldn't wait to find out how she ended up in prison... and i supposed all this will end up tragically like most Filipino novels? Teeheehee... i can see it now. However, the suspense is killing me and you HAVE to update soon! i like this better than the other one, to tell you the truth. (Patriotic, ain't I?)
Eh, keep it up! great writing! ^_^ ja!
5/13/2003 c8 Kala
Whoa. They are second cousins! Hm...wonder what'll happen next...
Whoa. They are second cousins! Hm...wonder what'll happen next...
5/13/2003 c7 fiction reader
hmm was this inspired by nick joaquin's may day eve? if i remember exactly, the main character in his short story was agueda also. just wondering
hmm was this inspired by nick joaquin's may day eve? if i remember exactly, the main character in his short story was agueda also. just wondering
5/13/2003 c8 Z
Great story. Can't wait to read more...
Great story. Can't wait to read more...
5/5/2003 c7 Kala
Oh. 'Tis interesting~
Oh. 'Tis interesting~