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8/22/2003 c1 57teh tarik
That was great! I liked it a lot! Continue writing!
8/22/2003 c1 37handle187
This is absolutely hilarious ! One of my favorite poems on Fiction Press
5/5/2003 c4 68Princess Mulan
congratulation! nice ot know you are good together!

another cool haiku!

nice job
5/5/2003 c3 Princess Mulan
patient is a good virture

too bad people often mistake it for weakness

great job
5/5/2003 c2 Princess Mulan
O_O

another very interesting idea.

She can't be flawed!

nice...
5/5/2003 c1 Princess Mulan
hmm.. very cool idea

nice haiku! ^_^

I love the hard disk part.
5/5/2003 c4 iridium
*huge smile* Thank you SO MUCH for the review. I'm so honoured that you spent the time to review that thing. Yep, I wrote it when I was a freshman. The original first draft ended in the girl killing the guy, but I decided to change it just because . . . well, I don't know. I didn't really want to seem so disturbed, hehe, because the story is derived from real life and the possibility of falling off the edge. But yeah, I completely agree with your constructive criticism. I might as well change the craptacular ending; it didn't really add much to the story. But anyway, thank you! Can't say that enough! I hardly ever get in-depth reviews like that! :)

On the subject of your haikus - I'm not so good at analyzing poetry so I'll just tell you that I like them. The first one really jumped out at me.

Thanks again,

iri
5/4/2003 c2 iridium
Nice work. I like the first one a lot.

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