for Can't you?4/19/2004 c1 
81Ultimate Schuyler
This is good! I'm guessing, looking at your other stories, you are German, but learned English? Well then, I have a few things to point out, then:
Please tell me that you feel my way too.
I said I hated you but that's damn.
Okay, "my way" and "damn" are incorrect. The rest is pretty good, I think! Just check over the grammar abit, and maybe repost an edited version of this, if you want? I guess you could...
Anyway, this is GREAT! I really loved it! ^_^ I've added you to my favorite's list. ^_^
81Ultimate SchuylerThis is good! I'm guessing, looking at your other stories, you are German, but learned English? Well then, I have a few things to point out, then:
Please tell me that you feel my way too.
I said I hated you but that's damn.
Okay, "my way" and "damn" are incorrect. The rest is pretty good, I think! Just check over the grammar abit, and maybe repost an edited version of this, if you want? I guess you could...
Anyway, this is GREAT! I really loved it! ^_^ I've added you to my favorite's list. ^_^
5/4/2003 c1 21NatashaRostof
Writing is a very good way of expressing your feelings.
Very nice message, but my suggestion would be that you try it freeform, so the rhyming isn't as akward.
Good job. :o)
21NatashaRostofWriting is a very good way of expressing your feelings.
Very nice message, but my suggestion would be that you try it freeform, so the rhyming isn't as akward.
Good job. :o)