for Sister2/13/2004 c1 
22Loki Mischeif-Maker
Cool.
Very picturesque (spelling?) and very awesome. You've done a good job of describing everything in this piece.
Oh, and thanks for you reviews!
22Loki Mischeif-MakerCool.
Very picturesque (spelling?) and very awesome. You've done a good job of describing everything in this piece.
Oh, and thanks for you reviews!
9/9/2003 c1 JazzeeT
isnt this a bit harsh. hm but i guess u know ur sister. this is sad though that pple are like this. thnk god my siblings arent like taht. nice poem though
isnt this a bit harsh. hm but i guess u know ur sister. this is sad though that pple are like this. thnk god my siblings arent like taht. nice poem though
8/24/2003 c1 18wanderingcloud
I can completely relate to this, I sometimes share these exact feelings with my brother... I hope things between you and your sister get better tho: sometime we need to look at things from a different point of view.
~Elfie
18wanderingcloudI can completely relate to this, I sometimes share these exact feelings with my brother... I hope things between you and your sister get better tho: sometime we need to look at things from a different point of view.
~Elfie
7/31/2003 c1 10Heinrich
Simple and interesting, yet it gets the message across fully and maybe even a little more. I can't really relate it to sister, but to a friend I once had. Makes you think. . .
The descriptions were good!
-Heinrich
10HeinrichSimple and interesting, yet it gets the message across fully and maybe even a little more. I can't really relate it to sister, but to a friend I once had. Makes you think. . .
The descriptions were good!
-Heinrich
7/30/2003 c1 17Sliver-of-Silver
tee hee hee! It reminds me of my sister! I love it! I'd show it to my sis...but she'd kill me then. yeah...well, i liked it!
17Sliver-of-Silvertee hee hee! It reminds me of my sister! I love it! I'd show it to my sis...but she'd kill me then. yeah...well, i liked it!
7/30/2003 c1 27Brighty
Wow, that's sad... I know it when you just can't imagine that a person has feelings or emotions. They just seem evil. Maybe, you should give her a chance.
27BrightyWow, that's sad... I know it when you just can't imagine that a person has feelings or emotions. They just seem evil. Maybe, you should give her a chance.
7/28/2003 c1 5RealityBites289
I don't have a sister, but my best friend does, and this sounds just like her.
5RealityBites289I don't have a sister, but my best friend does, and this sounds just like her.
7/10/2003 c1 5Knightengale
Oh, I'd hate to have a sister like that. Actually, I have only brothers, but I always wanted a sister. Anyway, I liked the poem.
5KnightengaleOh, I'd hate to have a sister like that. Actually, I have only brothers, but I always wanted a sister. Anyway, I liked the poem.
5/16/2003 c1 25TylerB
i liked the poem! but saying that about someone is really mean. she must really not have a heart for you to say that about her
25TylerBi liked the poem! but saying that about someone is really mean. she must really not have a heart for you to say that about her
5/11/2003 c1 74wonky donkey
Wow that sucks to have a sister like that.
Is she really that bad?
huh well good poem it really shows your feeliings
74wonky donkeyWow that sucks to have a sister like that.
Is she really that bad?
huh well good poem it really shows your feeliings
5/5/2003 c1 prettyroze78
i liked this poem because it reminds me off my sister and that is how she is pretty smart but without a heart.
i liked this poem because it reminds me off my sister and that is how she is pretty smart but without a heart.