for Rejected8/11/2003 c1 
20SilentMidnight
I don't think you could have been any more on the dot than you were with this poem. You completely captured the essence of rejection. Strange vocabulary of mine, yes, I know, but still. I really liked it. Keep writing!
20SilentMidnightI don't think you could have been any more on the dot than you were with this poem. You completely captured the essence of rejection. Strange vocabulary of mine, yes, I know, but still. I really liked it. Keep writing!
6/24/2003 c1 196Damaged
"But it's all in vain"
Wow. That was powerful and really struck me. And yes, rejection is VERY bitter tasting, as you said in the last line of the last stanza.
196Damaged"But it's all in vain"
Wow. That was powerful and really struck me. And yes, rejection is VERY bitter tasting, as you said in the last line of the last stanza.
5/12/2003 c1 7mythirdeye
Rejection sucks. I put it down to those two words and you managed to make it sound really beautiful :)
But honestly, if this is based on some truth, then I gotta say whoever rejected you is no where near deserving you. Great work, keep it up :)
7mythirdeyeRejection sucks. I put it down to those two words and you managed to make it sound really beautiful :)
But honestly, if this is based on some truth, then I gotta say whoever rejected you is no where near deserving you. Great work, keep it up :)
5/6/2003 c1 11DeeTzy
~sigh~
Life is such a bitch isn't it?
'the bitter taste of rejection' - ouch
Well "whoever" this guy may be he obviously isn't good enough for you.
-Dee
11DeeTzy~sigh~
Life is such a bitch isn't it?
'the bitter taste of rejection' - ouch
Well "whoever" this guy may be he obviously isn't good enough for you.
-Dee
5/6/2003 c1 50PurpleLilac
Hey, thanx for reviewing my poem...very touched!Neway, back to ure poem, it might surprise you but I often feel this way...Thank God for my wonderful friends!So, keep up the beautiful work!
P/s: I dun think there's much to learn from me coz I have only just started writing! =P
50PurpleLilacHey, thanx for reviewing my poem...very touched!Neway, back to ure poem, it might surprise you but I often feel this way...Thank God for my wonderful friends!So, keep up the beautiful work!
P/s: I dun think there's much to learn from me coz I have only just started writing! =P
5/5/2003 c1 Arika Kamiya
this is sad but it is a really good poem me like me like ^_^
this is sad but it is a really good poem me like me like ^_^
5/5/2003 c1 16Kaze-Shukun
*Sniff* Short, but touching, has never happened to me, but still, could you be so kind to check out my story: A New Path?
16Kaze-Shukun*Sniff* Short, but touching, has never happened to me, but still, could you be so kind to check out my story: A New Path?