for The Outsider
1/17/2004 c1
11Jez-Arinni have no idea why but when i read this poem i felt as though it sounds like a rap. sorry if it insulted u but i really meant it as a compliment.
^_^
great poem!
5/5/2003 c1
89Lyria ShardA well written, emotional poem, nice.
Lyria
5/5/2003 c1
47SkivverusSounds familiar... good rhyme; add rhythm, maybe?