for Fever12/15/2013 c1 
1JasmineRaven
Wow...kinda scary. I don't sleep well when I am sick either! :D well written poem! I like it!
1JasmineRavenWow...kinda scary. I don't sleep well when I am sick either! :D well written poem! I like it!
9/6/2003 c1 2Undraya
Wow- um... Having a fever is really bad but i never took it at this point of view. Its well written, it kept a nice beat though some parts did sound a bit- forced? Anyway it was pretty good.
thanks for reviewing my story, though if you don't want to continue it, then at least read the review i put there. It answers most of your questions.
2UndrayaWow- um... Having a fever is really bad but i never took it at this point of view. Its well written, it kept a nice beat though some parts did sound a bit- forced? Anyway it was pretty good.
thanks for reviewing my story, though if you don't want to continue it, then at least read the review i put there. It answers most of your questions.
8/25/2003 c1 38Thetis
Interestingly done, a few parts felt slightly forced, imagery was decent and it flowed fairly smoothly. Structure wise it was good, the concept was beyond good as it's moderatly easy to grasp, especially if you've been sick as well. Nicely done ^_^
38ThetisInterestingly done, a few parts felt slightly forced, imagery was decent and it flowed fairly smoothly. Structure wise it was good, the concept was beyond good as it's moderatly easy to grasp, especially if you've been sick as well. Nicely done ^_^
6/6/2003 c1 bellakawashima
i am the person who you reviewed about Why Kids Don't Eat Vegetables
I am wondering how you can do all the things you want to. (if you don't know what i'm talking about, look at your profile)
I just wrote another story like the one you reviewed
you can check it out( it is called Weird Bananas and An Evil Monkey
i am the person who you reviewed about Why Kids Don't Eat Vegetables
I am wondering how you can do all the things you want to. (if you don't know what i'm talking about, look at your profile)
I just wrote another story like the one you reviewed
you can check it out( it is called Weird Bananas and An Evil Monkey
5/7/2003 c1 1Padlock Maniac
beautifully worded! ! !
reminds me exactly of what i feel like when i've got a fever. like i'm going insane (like i'm not insane already. . .) and all i can do it wait till the next day and see if it subsides. your a fantastic writer ^_^
1Padlock Maniacbeautifully worded! ! !
reminds me exactly of what i feel like when i've got a fever. like i'm going insane (like i'm not insane already. . .) and all i can do it wait till the next day and see if it subsides. your a fantastic writer ^_^