for I Thought I'd Lost You7/15/2003 c16 
13Faded Soulfire
Boy, what a way to end a chapter...I had a feeling that you'd do something to that effect with using a line from the title of the story. It wasn't predictable or anything but it seemed to make the most sense to me since you were planning on writing the sequel to this. Hopefully, I get to be the faithful reviewer of your next story. I'm not normally great at reviewing but I'm hyper now!
She found him! Lets all go out and have a party? I'm so hyper it's ridiculous...keep on posting ac4r & I look very much forward to the next sequel to this trilogy...
Well, I should sleep... I need sleep & glad to be good old home again. Hopefully I get to check out more of dc-hypergrl's stuff..I mean, I don't want to start it and then not be able to read it for days cuz I'd pull out my hair in anticipation.
See you on aim I guess lol..not much more to say..I've run out of steam...Later Julia.
13Faded SoulfireBoy, what a way to end a chapter...I had a feeling that you'd do something to that effect with using a line from the title of the story. It wasn't predictable or anything but it seemed to make the most sense to me since you were planning on writing the sequel to this. Hopefully, I get to be the faithful reviewer of your next story. I'm not normally great at reviewing but I'm hyper now!
She found him! Lets all go out and have a party? I'm so hyper it's ridiculous...keep on posting ac4r & I look very much forward to the next sequel to this trilogy...
Well, I should sleep... I need sleep & glad to be good old home again. Hopefully I get to check out more of dc-hypergrl's stuff..I mean, I don't want to start it and then not be able to read it for days cuz I'd pull out my hair in anticipation.
See you on aim I guess lol..not much more to say..I've run out of steam...Later Julia.
7/15/2003 c16 skeeta
Another amazing chapter Julia... jeez your so good at this ok i reviewed now you can post the third story :D!
Another amazing chapter Julia... jeez your so good at this ok i reviewed now you can post the third story :D!
7/15/2003 c16 luckynumba7
this is such a good story! you need to get with the new story or new chapter whatever you are doing! LOL i love it! update soon!
love you!
luckynumba7
this is such a good story! you need to get with the new story or new chapter whatever you are doing! LOL i love it! update soon!
love you!
luckynumba7
7/15/2003 c16 mollymollymollymolly
I LOVE THE WAY YOU ENED IT! SOO SWEET! i cant wait til the next story comes out! exclamation!
I LOVE THE WAY YOU ENED IT! SOO SWEET! i cant wait til the next story comes out! exclamation!
7/11/2003 c15 Tasha Bean
:( that's sad :( I hope she finds him. This is depressing! He's such a sweet guy..he's just made some mistakes...i think he truly loves her..augh..what can i say? i'm a hopeless romantic. ::Blush:: lol
:( that's sad :( I hope she finds him. This is depressing! He's such a sweet guy..he's just made some mistakes...i think he truly loves her..augh..what can i say? i'm a hopeless romantic. ::Blush:: lol
7/11/2003 c15 14Orenji Yume
yes, this chapter surely reassured me. ^_^ thank goodness...but she still didn't find shawn yet...*sigh* pls update soon!
14Orenji Yumeyes, this chapter surely reassured me. ^_^ thank goodness...but she still didn't find shawn yet...*sigh* pls update soon!
7/10/2003 c15 14raineblade-ace
Where is he? Please update soon. The suspense is killing me. *chokes over and dies* You killed me! j/k
14raineblade-aceWhere is he? Please update soon. The suspense is killing me. *chokes over and dies* You killed me! j/k
7/10/2003 c15 ollymay
har dee har-har. i found 2 more spellos XD.
1. 'The trek, or modicum of onee...' i'm not sure about that one, but isn't it supposed to be 'one'? onee is japanese for..uh...well, i forgot. XD.
2. '...but what choice did I have?” ' i don't think there is supposed to be a " at the end of it as it is a...action-y though thingeh. ok, i know i'm too picky for my own good, but thats the way i am.
good chappie!
-merk
har dee har-har. i found 2 more spellos XD.
1. 'The trek, or modicum of onee...' i'm not sure about that one, but isn't it supposed to be 'one'? onee is japanese for..uh...well, i forgot. XD.
2. '...but what choice did I have?” ' i don't think there is supposed to be a " at the end of it as it is a...action-y though thingeh. ok, i know i'm too picky for my own good, but thats the way i am.
good chappie!
-merk
7/10/2003 c15 13Faded Soulfire
Ok, it is a lot more earlier now so this review should make more sense, hopefully.
First off, at first I thought that guy was like some sort of freaky murderer who wanted to do bad things to Jen or Amanda. Or maybe I just like to think of things in the absolute worst situation. Amazingly, Jen actually found the park! At least it seems like she can follow directions other's give her... And hm...I wonder if Shawn is somewhere around the park? I'm going to think super hard and try and think of where he could possibly be.
On ECA, I just started writing the chapter yesterday. I kinda got a bit of a jump start but it could take a day or so until I get it to you. Just wanted to give you a heads up on that. Hopefully my grammar and such will be better this time around.
So, keep updating...I'm getting to ac4r now, so if I think of anything to add, I'll say it there.
Gosh, that was quite a long review lol...So update again soon. I gotta know what happens, but I'll check out dc-hypergrl's stuff for something to do until then.
~Andrea
13Faded SoulfireOk, it is a lot more earlier now so this review should make more sense, hopefully.
First off, at first I thought that guy was like some sort of freaky murderer who wanted to do bad things to Jen or Amanda. Or maybe I just like to think of things in the absolute worst situation. Amazingly, Jen actually found the park! At least it seems like she can follow directions other's give her... And hm...I wonder if Shawn is somewhere around the park? I'm going to think super hard and try and think of where he could possibly be.
On ECA, I just started writing the chapter yesterday. I kinda got a bit of a jump start but it could take a day or so until I get it to you. Just wanted to give you a heads up on that. Hopefully my grammar and such will be better this time around.
So, keep updating...I'm getting to ac4r now, so if I think of anything to add, I'll say it there.
Gosh, that was quite a long review lol...So update again soon. I gotta know what happens, but I'll check out dc-hypergrl's stuff for something to do until then.
~Andrea
7/10/2003 c14 kry4me
I really lyke ur story. Is Jen going to find Shawn on time? What's going to happen next in the chapter? PLEASE! Give me just a LITTLE hint?
I really lyke ur story. Is Jen going to find Shawn on time? What's going to happen next in the chapter? PLEASE! Give me just a LITTLE hint?
7/9/2003 c14 13Faded Soulfire
In the last review .. i meant that it was part of this story...god, i think that i wrote that review at like 3 in the morning... so I might have said some stuff that didn't make a lot of sense. Hopefully, i make more sense now...possibly not. Ok, ya know what? I'm just going to give up while I am behind... The water part was amusing... can't wait to see what else you add to the next few chapters. Now, I should really get to bed..I'll get to ac4r later, hopefully...I'm wrecked...its morning and I need sleep.
Much Love, Faded Soulfire
13Faded SoulfireIn the last review .. i meant that it was part of this story...god, i think that i wrote that review at like 3 in the morning... so I might have said some stuff that didn't make a lot of sense. Hopefully, i make more sense now...possibly not. Ok, ya know what? I'm just going to give up while I am behind... The water part was amusing... can't wait to see what else you add to the next few chapters. Now, I should really get to bed..I'll get to ac4r later, hopefully...I'm wrecked...its morning and I need sleep.
Much Love, Faded Soulfire
7/7/2003 c14 ME1 as in. m.e
Ok been,i lurved this chappie as usual, but i think that we was in kjust such a hurry that we was too busy to pay attention to detials, hm? three things i noticed...,
1. "to her voice, that had a strong southern accent to it." Well, if you hadn't heard her speak before it wouldnt make much sense to say that. you should add that after her first sentence...it would just make more sense.
2. "...save the peeing paint..." uh, don't you mean peeLing? XD
3. "His hair and bear were unkempt and messy..." ehr..bearD?
well, now that i'm done pokin' fun at -uh, i mean HELPING you, i'ma go..uh...eat. O_o
Ok been,i lurved this chappie as usual, but i think that we was in kjust such a hurry that we was too busy to pay attention to detials, hm? three things i noticed...,
1. "to her voice, that had a strong southern accent to it." Well, if you hadn't heard her speak before it wouldnt make much sense to say that. you should add that after her first sentence...it would just make more sense.
2. "...save the peeing paint..." uh, don't you mean peeLing? XD
3. "His hair and bear were unkempt and messy..." ehr..bearD?
well, now that i'm done pokin' fun at -uh, i mean HELPING you, i'ma go..uh...eat. O_o
7/6/2003 c14 8Tasha Bean
i really like this one! i hope she finds SHawn..and yes, i am perceptive..and i tend to think in ways that other people don't..lol
8Tasha Beani really like this one! i hope she finds SHawn..and yes, i am perceptive..and i tend to think in ways that other people don't..lol