for Lies of the Heart5/23/2005 c16 
3Vaeleska
OMGG FINALLY SHE REALIZES SHE LOVES MAT
THEY BETTER GET TOGETER ASAP
lUvies
SPam
3VaeleskaOMGG FINALLY SHE REALIZES SHE LOVES MAT
THEY BETTER GET TOGETER ASAP
lUvies
SPam
5/22/2005 c15 2BlackPanther02
are you ever going to update? not being pushy, im just eager to see how it ends.all.~Panther
2BlackPanther02are you ever going to update? not being pushy, im just eager to see how it ends.all.~Panther
5/20/2005 c15 Beatriz
I'm so glad that your story was on the spotlight! When I saw it I thought that it should be interesting because usually the main character has not as many difficulties as Nat to get the guy. But instead of being interesting, this story was amazing! I love Nat's personality and how she's so shy and definetly not perfect which is great. She seem more real this way. And altough I prefer her with Jeremy, it's obvious that she's gonna end with Matt. I think that's fair, it seems that Matt really loves her and Jeremy doesn't feel that way about her. After all, he only realised he liked her one week before and Matt was always there to help her which shows the great affection that he has for her. But please don't make Jeremy mean so Nat has a reason to break up with him and stay with Matt!Nat's sister kinda drives me crazy and of course I want to kill Jessica for being such a pain in the ass! Your writing is really good, you describe things well and the action developes easily. Your story reminds me of Meg Cabot's ones (by the way, you're not her, right? I'm joking of course ^.~) and I love her books so I hope that I'm complimenting you when I say this! Anyway, keep up the great work and please please please update fast!I'm dying to know what happens in the dance and how the story ends.Bye!
I'm so glad that your story was on the spotlight! When I saw it I thought that it should be interesting because usually the main character has not as many difficulties as Nat to get the guy. But instead of being interesting, this story was amazing! I love Nat's personality and how she's so shy and definetly not perfect which is great. She seem more real this way. And altough I prefer her with Jeremy, it's obvious that she's gonna end with Matt. I think that's fair, it seems that Matt really loves her and Jeremy doesn't feel that way about her. After all, he only realised he liked her one week before and Matt was always there to help her which shows the great affection that he has for her. But please don't make Jeremy mean so Nat has a reason to break up with him and stay with Matt!Nat's sister kinda drives me crazy and of course I want to kill Jessica for being such a pain in the ass! Your writing is really good, you describe things well and the action developes easily. Your story reminds me of Meg Cabot's ones (by the way, you're not her, right? I'm joking of course ^.~) and I love her books so I hope that I'm complimenting you when I say this! Anyway, keep up the great work and please please please update fast!I'm dying to know what happens in the dance and how the story ends.Bye!
5/12/2005 c15 1bummertime
Oohh! good story. I hate bitchy sisters. But i got a bastard for a brother. These girls hated me and invited every girl in the class to a party and not me and they talked to my bro about it and he laughed and said i had no friends or w/e. I was crying for like a week but that was a year ago and he's a lot more mature cause he's in 10th grade. Neways update!~Sugpup ^.^
1bummertimeOohh! good story. I hate bitchy sisters. But i got a bastard for a brother. These girls hated me and invited every girl in the class to a party and not me and they talked to my bro about it and he laughed and said i had no friends or w/e. I was crying for like a week but that was a year ago and he's a lot more mature cause he's in 10th grade. Neways update!~Sugpup ^.^
4/25/2005 c15 6Livin-2-Sing
OMG! WHAT HAPPENS? WRITE! you HAVE TO up date NOW! Nat leaves jeremy for matt right? or does she stay with jermey, but with giult? grr...finsih it!
6Livin-2-SingOMG! WHAT HAPPENS? WRITE! you HAVE TO up date NOW! Nat leaves jeremy for matt right? or does she stay with jermey, but with giult? grr...finsih it!
4/25/2005 c10 Livin-2-Sing
OMG your realy good at writing! ive been reading your chapter, and jsut never got to updating, but wen i read this chapter, it really hit me, I have pretty much the same sitation, only im in grade 9, and ive been well, stalking him since grade 8:D he will never notice me, but still! and my friend is in a state of love, she is also stalking this guy Taylor, well, I LOVE UR CHAPTERS! ill update again wen i get to chap. 15!keep writing! your awesome!
OMG your realy good at writing! ive been reading your chapter, and jsut never got to updating, but wen i read this chapter, it really hit me, I have pretty much the same sitation, only im in grade 9, and ive been well, stalking him since grade 8:D he will never notice me, but still! and my friend is in a state of love, she is also stalking this guy Taylor, well, I LOVE UR CHAPTERS! ill update again wen i get to chap. 15!keep writing! your awesome!
4/17/2005 c15 Salt and Vinegar Pringles
Lol, alrighty. SVP I am! Here to save the day with my ultra cool and unbelievably late review! (sorry :O). Um, I still don't like Jeremy and now Nat is totally iffy, I mean is she blind? Lol, I get heated over these kind of situations. But they are fun and awesome to read! Hope ya update soon, take as long (not too long) as you need. :Dciao! good writin' and "two thumbs up."
Lol, alrighty. SVP I am! Here to save the day with my ultra cool and unbelievably late review! (sorry :O). Um, I still don't like Jeremy and now Nat is totally iffy, I mean is she blind? Lol, I get heated over these kind of situations. But they are fun and awesome to read! Hope ya update soon, take as long (not too long) as you need. :Dciao! good writin' and "two thumbs up."
3/31/2005 c1 x3preshuzZ
wow! dis is like so weird! the first chapter i read practically made me fall in love with it!lol! its weird tho.. cuz i just wrote something similar on my xanga.. and i feel the same way about this guy.. its just funny.. great way to start out a story.. keep up the good work!
well.. on to the next chappy
wow! dis is like so weird! the first chapter i read practically made me fall in love with it!lol! its weird tho.. cuz i just wrote something similar on my xanga.. and i feel the same way about this guy.. its just funny.. great way to start out a story.. keep up the good work!
well.. on to the next chappy
3/26/2005 c15 1flonshoe
HURRAY! U UPDATED! I really like this story but, the obvious choice is Matt, so Nat shoudl quit wasting her time...I get really wrapped up in stories and tend to think the characters are real. But thats a compliment. You make the story seem real. Congrats on the job. Well, almost job. I really hope you will keep updating though. PUS
LuvLauren
1flonshoeHURRAY! U UPDATED! I really like this story but, the obvious choice is Matt, so Nat shoudl quit wasting her time...I get really wrapped up in stories and tend to think the characters are real. But thats a compliment. You make the story seem real. Congrats on the job. Well, almost job. I really hope you will keep updating though. PUS
LuvLauren
3/22/2005 c15 2CynicInLove
cant give a long review..just know that this is an awesome story! ill go more into detail later i've got so much to say.but dont have time right now..anyways, please updates oN!
2CynicInLovecant give a long review..just know that this is an awesome story! ill go more into detail later i've got so much to say.but dont have time right now..anyways, please updates oN!
3/17/2005 c15 4lindserly
eek! i'm now confused. i can't wait for you to update.
okay so gossipy girls said matt said bad s* about natalie... which we know isn't true because he loves her. but they also said jeremy wants to make sam jealous... now i'm not sure if there's any validity in that or not. because the other stuff was false, plus he had said to nat that he just wanted to be friends with sam, and he seemed genuine enough... but i know something has to happen for Natalie and Matt to be together without her thinking about jeremy. becuz right now she is so head over heels for both guys. i kind of want jeremy to end up being evil, but then i don't becuz i don't want it to be like the only reason natalie ended up with matt was becuz she saw the "light" after jeremey hurt her. i want her to be with matt because she WANTS 400 percent ot be with Matt.
ugh. i hope you do not take too long to update. how long do you plan this story on being? just curious :)
4lindserlyeek! i'm now confused. i can't wait for you to update.
okay so gossipy girls said matt said bad s* about natalie... which we know isn't true because he loves her. but they also said jeremy wants to make sam jealous... now i'm not sure if there's any validity in that or not. because the other stuff was false, plus he had said to nat that he just wanted to be friends with sam, and he seemed genuine enough... but i know something has to happen for Natalie and Matt to be together without her thinking about jeremy. becuz right now she is so head over heels for both guys. i kind of want jeremy to end up being evil, but then i don't becuz i don't want it to be like the only reason natalie ended up with matt was becuz she saw the "light" after jeremey hurt her. i want her to be with matt because she WANTS 400 percent ot be with Matt.
ugh. i hope you do not take too long to update. how long do you plan this story on being? just curious :)
3/17/2005 c14 lindserly
now i really like jeremy.*throws hands up in air in frustration* which ever one natalie doesn't choose i'll take him! i think in the end she's going to choose matt but i don't want jeremy hurt now.
now i really like jeremy.*throws hands up in air in frustration* which ever one natalie doesn't choose i'll take him! i think in the end she's going to choose matt but i don't want jeremy hurt now.
3/17/2005 c12 lindserly
ah that matt. i like jeremy. but i'm still (i think i've reviewed and said this before) rooting for matt and natalie. he just did the same thing to her that she did jeremy. such a smartie.
ah that matt. i like jeremy. but i'm still (i think i've reviewed and said this before) rooting for matt and natalie. he just did the same thing to her that she did jeremy. such a smartie.