for Lies of the Heart3/12/2005 c15 ally
i've read this story since the beginning, and i don't think i've ever reviewed before. i don't have much time, but i hope she ends up with matt and that she humiliates jessica really badly, because she's a bitch!
i've read this story since the beginning, and i don't think i've ever reviewed before. i don't have much time, but i hope she ends up with matt and that she humiliates jessica really badly, because she's a bitch!
3/12/2005 c15 Emma
God some people are so evil. It's great you updated I was so happy when I saw you did. Write soon!
God some people are so evil. It's great you updated I was so happy when I saw you did. Write soon!
3/11/2005 c9 
4lindserly
heh this is quite the... um square? it's not really a triangle so...i think matt like natalie, natlalie likes jeremy (well duh), jeremy likes sam, i don't know who the hell sam REALLY likes, maybe jeremy. i think eventually jeremy will like natalie. but i'm not sure yet if i prefer matt or jeremy. usually i'd be a jeremy kinda girl but so far i like em both. and i'm kinda leaning towards matt. and if i'm wrong and matt doesn't really like natalie my reviews are going to be so retarded to you. i'm sure they are already. forgive me it's 4 am.
4lindserlyheh this is quite the... um square? it's not really a triangle so...i think matt like natalie, natlalie likes jeremy (well duh), jeremy likes sam, i don't know who the hell sam REALLY likes, maybe jeremy. i think eventually jeremy will like natalie. but i'm not sure yet if i prefer matt or jeremy. usually i'd be a jeremy kinda girl but so far i like em both. and i'm kinda leaning towards matt. and if i'm wrong and matt doesn't really like natalie my reviews are going to be so retarded to you. i'm sure they are already. forgive me it's 4 am.
3/10/2005 c7 lindserly
haha i've been wondering if maybe matt and nat are going to hook up and now with the wayt hings are looking... i think things aren't going to be the typical romance.
wow if that didn't make sense my apologies.
haha i've been wondering if maybe matt and nat are going to hook up and now with the wayt hings are looking... i think things aren't going to be the typical romance.
wow if that didn't make sense my apologies.
3/10/2005 c6 lindserly
that was so sad and depressing.
although just before he went to ask her what he really wanted to i knew that's what it would be.
but still so sad. poor natalie.
that was so sad and depressing.
although just before he went to ask her what he really wanted to i knew that's what it would be.
but still so sad. poor natalie.
3/6/2005 c15 2Crazy Wynona
You know, I must say... I'm rooting for Matt. Jeremy, personally, is too... well, unsuitable... I mean, sure, he's sweet and all, but I'm all for the best friends realizing they're in love with each other thing...
Well, toodles!
P.S. This is really good story... UPDATE SOON, PLEASE!
2Crazy WynonaYou know, I must say... I'm rooting for Matt. Jeremy, personally, is too... well, unsuitable... I mean, sure, he's sweet and all, but I'm all for the best friends realizing they're in love with each other thing...
Well, toodles!
P.S. This is really good story... UPDATE SOON, PLEASE!
3/6/2005 c15 Jessica S1
So I stumbled upon this story in an attempt to procrastinate even more on my politics paper, and I definitely succeeded. Your story captured my attention, and held me there until I realized I'd reach the end of the chapters available to me. And then I cried. Hee. Well, no I didn't, but I just wanted to say that I love it.
While your main character is certainly dense, aren't we girls all from time to time? And I like that her relationship with Jeremy isn't terrible, even though Matt seems to be your male protagonist. You haven't created Jeremy to be a bad character, which is a trap that so many writers seem to fall into. Sometimes people fit, sometimes people don't. But I'll have you know that I'm quite partial to Matt myself. I had an inkling from the first few chapters that he was in love with her. And I like that. The little hints you give.
Sigh. I wish I could gush some more, but now I need to get down and dirty with my paper. I certainly hope that you update soon.
So I stumbled upon this story in an attempt to procrastinate even more on my politics paper, and I definitely succeeded. Your story captured my attention, and held me there until I realized I'd reach the end of the chapters available to me. And then I cried. Hee. Well, no I didn't, but I just wanted to say that I love it.
While your main character is certainly dense, aren't we girls all from time to time? And I like that her relationship with Jeremy isn't terrible, even though Matt seems to be your male protagonist. You haven't created Jeremy to be a bad character, which is a trap that so many writers seem to fall into. Sometimes people fit, sometimes people don't. But I'll have you know that I'm quite partial to Matt myself. I had an inkling from the first few chapters that he was in love with her. And I like that. The little hints you give.
Sigh. I wish I could gush some more, but now I need to get down and dirty with my paper. I certainly hope that you update soon.
3/5/2005 c15 Arcia
Hey! It's me, and your story is great! Although there was a lot of tension...well...there was a lot of emotion...and language...but anyway...yeah...keep it up!
...And Jeremy still scares me...but not as much as Jessica...
Hey! It's me, and your story is great! Although there was a lot of tension...well...there was a lot of emotion...and language...but anyway...yeah...keep it up!
...And Jeremy still scares me...but not as much as Jessica...
3/5/2005 c15 ChibiCherrybear
this is an amzing story! i read the whole thing in an hour. you're a great writer. please continue with the story. i can't wait for the next chapter.
this is an amzing story! i read the whole thing in an hour. you're a great writer. please continue with the story. i can't wait for the next chapter.
3/4/2005 c15 1In GOP We Trust
I love it! I love it! Go Jeremy/Natalie! But, ooh...it makes me wonder...IS Jeremy just using her? Yes, my name is a Harry Potter reference, and no, I don't remember you mentioning it before (but...then again...I don't remember anything, lol) Glad u think my name is clever, I think your story's brilliant, keep it up, I'll be waiting!
1In GOP We TrustI love it! I love it! Go Jeremy/Natalie! But, ooh...it makes me wonder...IS Jeremy just using her? Yes, my name is a Harry Potter reference, and no, I don't remember you mentioning it before (but...then again...I don't remember anything, lol) Glad u think my name is clever, I think your story's brilliant, keep it up, I'll be waiting!
3/3/2005 c15 just moi
Ehh... that chapter was kinda boring... and ur writing style isn't original... Besides the main character is SO DITZY... really, really dense girl. not fun.
Ehh... that chapter was kinda boring... and ur writing style isn't original... Besides the main character is SO DITZY... really, really dense girl. not fun.
3/3/2005 c15 1Rhea Larkin
Yes! The next chapter! I'm so glad you finally got it out. Also, congratulations on your new job! That's really exciting, I bet :)
Now, on to the actual review...
I'm glad things worked out (so far) between Natalie and Matt, though Natalie is -still- clueless about Matt's feelings. (I'll be glad when it suddenly dawns on her ^_^)
I'm going to speculate a bit, so you can ignore this part of you want. I'm still a little surprised that Matt actually accepted Jessica's offer to the dance. It suggests that he's somewhat sad that Natalie has let go of him so easily in favor of Jeremy. Maybe he thinks that going out with Jessica will help ease the pain of being rejected. It's an interesting plot twist there. It almost seems uncharacteristic of Matt. Rather strange, but not in a bad way.
I'm still in the dark, though, so don't worry :) I can't wait for the chapter of the dance, which is probably some kind of climax, or for the rematch between Jessica and Natalie (oh god, I hated Jessica for doing that to Nat! And Rachel for denouncing her own sister!). The story is really heating up now; I hope you find time to keep writing it! I await the next installment eagerly. :)
1Rhea LarkinYes! The next chapter! I'm so glad you finally got it out. Also, congratulations on your new job! That's really exciting, I bet :)
Now, on to the actual review...
I'm glad things worked out (so far) between Natalie and Matt, though Natalie is -still- clueless about Matt's feelings. (I'll be glad when it suddenly dawns on her ^_^)
I'm going to speculate a bit, so you can ignore this part of you want. I'm still a little surprised that Matt actually accepted Jessica's offer to the dance. It suggests that he's somewhat sad that Natalie has let go of him so easily in favor of Jeremy. Maybe he thinks that going out with Jessica will help ease the pain of being rejected. It's an interesting plot twist there. It almost seems uncharacteristic of Matt. Rather strange, but not in a bad way.
I'm still in the dark, though, so don't worry :) I can't wait for the chapter of the dance, which is probably some kind of climax, or for the rematch between Jessica and Natalie (oh god, I hated Jessica for doing that to Nat! And Rachel for denouncing her own sister!). The story is really heating up now; I hope you find time to keep writing it! I await the next installment eagerly. :)
3/3/2005 c15 49SleepDontWeep
i just read dis in one go and i think its amazing! seriously amazing!
im in fits of laughter from d whole 'dyin from a broken face thing' but i also feel so bad for her.. i mean its matt... matt is lyk eveythin to her. y d thing wit jeremy? dat kinda scared me... god rachel's a fuckin bitch! anyways i love this and i hope u update soon! keep up d great work! ill definetly keep on eye on dis!love and admiration Gretchen45 xx plz review my story 'Truly madly deeply' as itd mean alot! tanx x
49SleepDontWeepi just read dis in one go and i think its amazing! seriously amazing!
im in fits of laughter from d whole 'dyin from a broken face thing' but i also feel so bad for her.. i mean its matt... matt is lyk eveythin to her. y d thing wit jeremy? dat kinda scared me... god rachel's a fuckin bitch! anyways i love this and i hope u update soon! keep up d great work! ill definetly keep on eye on dis!love and admiration Gretchen45 xx plz review my story 'Truly madly deeply' as itd mean alot! tanx x
3/3/2005 c15 3Vaeleska
YOU EVIL EVIL EVIL PERSON!UPDATE RIGHT NOW!how dare you leave me hanging? why did matt say yes to jessica anyways? aargh i HATE her. he and nat should def end up together. its cliche' but who carES?please please please let matt come to his senses and ditch jess somehow. rach is being annoying.the suspense is killing me.write more and QUICK!thanks for updating tho!-spam
3VaeleskaYOU EVIL EVIL EVIL PERSON!UPDATE RIGHT NOW!how dare you leave me hanging? why did matt say yes to jessica anyways? aargh i HATE her. he and nat should def end up together. its cliche' but who carES?please please please let matt come to his senses and ditch jess somehow. rach is being annoying.the suspense is killing me.write more and QUICK!thanks for updating tho!-spam