for Lies of the Heart12/10/2004 c12 
2chapsticklips
Wish his lips were on mine! *chortles* If this was a book, i wouldnt be able to put it down! When this gets published i'll be buying the hardcover for sure! =D Fantastical story!
2chapsticklipsWish his lips were on mine! *chortles* If this was a book, i wouldnt be able to put it down! When this gets published i'll be buying the hardcover for sure! =D Fantastical story!
12/10/2004 c11 chapsticklips
I'd say this is the part where the dagger goes straight into her heart? Poor Nat! I hope something happens with her and Matt though!
I'd say this is the part where the dagger goes straight into her heart? Poor Nat! I hope something happens with her and Matt though!
12/10/2004 c10 chapsticklips
Oh no! How embarrasing! Great writing, if you can make the reader cringe you are doing a great job, and that totally comes through your writing! Great chapter!
Oh no! How embarrasing! Great writing, if you can make the reader cringe you are doing a great job, and that totally comes through your writing! Great chapter!
12/10/2004 c9 chapsticklips
*Gives Matt a SEVERE checkover* hm... I wouldn't mind having Matt for myself now! eh eh eh! Damn these office chairs, your story is so good I am rivited to the office chair! Good story!
*Gives Matt a SEVERE checkover* hm... I wouldn't mind having Matt for myself now! eh eh eh! Damn these office chairs, your story is so good I am rivited to the office chair! Good story!
12/10/2004 c8 chapsticklips
Fanspastic is all I can say about your story! FAN bloody SPASTIC! Ha ha haity! I think I know whats going on here *cocks eyebrow at Matt ~.^ *
Fanspastic is all I can say about your story! FAN bloody SPASTIC! Ha ha haity! I think I know whats going on here *cocks eyebrow at Matt ~.^ *
12/10/2004 c6 chapsticklips
Aw... what a bumhole, that so sucks when a guy likes your mate and not you! Oh no, poor Nat!
Aw... what a bumhole, that so sucks when a guy likes your mate and not you! Oh no, poor Nat!
12/10/2004 c5 chapsticklips
Oh my God! How embarrasing would that be, him being only a bookshelf away, for her sake, I hope he didnt hear! or actually, maybe I do hope he heard...
Oh my God! How embarrasing would that be, him being only a bookshelf away, for her sake, I hope he didnt hear! or actually, maybe I do hope he heard...
12/10/2004 c4 chapsticklips
Thumbs up for sure! Yeah, im not a great reviewer, coz i dont know what to say, but this story is totally awsome dude!
Thumbs up for sure! Yeah, im not a great reviewer, coz i dont know what to say, but this story is totally awsome dude!
12/10/2004 c1 chapsticklips
That is so true! You've never said a word to him, what a good sentence, I think that relates to alot/everyone, great intro!
That is so true! You've never said a word to him, what a good sentence, I think that relates to alot/everyone, great intro!
12/9/2004 c14 1Rhea Larkin
Aw, gosh, Natalie and Jeremy are extremely cute together. And Jeremy *is* sweet. But I can definitely relate to Nat here: giddily excited over gaining the previously unattainable, yet still feeling sorry for the lost times with the good friend. Egads, I can't imagine what'll happen next! How can there be a happy ending all around? Well, I'm sure you, masterful writer that you are, have found a way. ;) Yet, still, I didn't get the impression that Natalie has fully grasped the simple fact that Matt likes her. Ah well. Not all people have much common sense when it comes to love. :)
1Rhea LarkinAw, gosh, Natalie and Jeremy are extremely cute together. And Jeremy *is* sweet. But I can definitely relate to Nat here: giddily excited over gaining the previously unattainable, yet still feeling sorry for the lost times with the good friend. Egads, I can't imagine what'll happen next! How can there be a happy ending all around? Well, I'm sure you, masterful writer that you are, have found a way. ;) Yet, still, I didn't get the impression that Natalie has fully grasped the simple fact that Matt likes her. Ah well. Not all people have much common sense when it comes to love. :)
12/9/2004 c14 1In GOP We Trust
Ooh, tension! I love it! Yayness, and Jeremy and Natalie are finally together! They're such a sweet couple, I mean it! And I'm having second thoughts about Matt and Natalie. Even though he's in love with her (YAY, I KNEW IT!), please, please, please, PLEASE don't make her get back together with him, I want it to be Jeremy/Natalie all the way!...though it looks like Sam may have some feelings for him after all...ooh...and so the plot thickens...you're on my Favorites List, so keep those updates a'comin'! ;D
1In GOP We TrustOoh, tension! I love it! Yayness, and Jeremy and Natalie are finally together! They're such a sweet couple, I mean it! And I'm having second thoughts about Matt and Natalie. Even though he's in love with her (YAY, I KNEW IT!), please, please, please, PLEASE don't make her get back together with him, I want it to be Jeremy/Natalie all the way!...though it looks like Sam may have some feelings for him after all...ooh...and so the plot thickens...you're on my Favorites List, so keep those updates a'comin'! ;D
12/9/2004 c14 0
hm...maybe you could make the kiss sound a little more romantic, and i think you put too much detail in the people's small actions and in her giddyness. it's been pretty obvious matt likes natalie but i think she's starting to seem kinda dense...and jeremy seemed alot more attractive before they actually started talking... the note thing was kinda lame. don't get me wrong though, i love the story, and although those things sound like alot, they're really just minor things. i loved the story and literally got giddy when it said there was a new chapter. i think you're a great writer, and i'm not trying to suck up just for the corrections i suggested.
hm...maybe you could make the kiss sound a little more romantic, and i think you put too much detail in the people's small actions and in her giddyness. it's been pretty obvious matt likes natalie but i think she's starting to seem kinda dense...and jeremy seemed alot more attractive before they actually started talking... the note thing was kinda lame. don't get me wrong though, i love the story, and although those things sound like alot, they're really just minor things. i loved the story and literally got giddy when it said there was a new chapter. i think you're a great writer, and i'm not trying to suck up just for the corrections i suggested.
12/9/2004 c14 Arcia
This is great! And...you're right, it would be boring...but...poor Matt...it's so sad...and Jeremy's kinda freaky...maybe just a bit...hehe...
This is great! And...you're right, it would be boring...but...poor Matt...it's so sad...and Jeremy's kinda freaky...maybe just a bit...hehe...
12/7/2004 c13 BCAndrews
NO! Not Jeremy and Natalie! MATT AND NATALIE! Aw...that's so evil and twisted and...no! MATT! ;-;
NO! Not Jeremy and Natalie! MATT AND NATALIE! Aw...that's so evil and twisted and...no! MATT! ;-;