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5/4/2004 c6 8WolfDemoness89
WOW been there done that, almost exact story, instead of the fact that the guy i liked, was more like a, a kinda friend to meeh. hope you update soon, this story is great! -Rach
4/28/2004 c6 lissalynn
that was awesome what a cliff hanger you better update soon i'm just dying to read the next chapter
4/15/2004 c6 2Squeaky
Ack - wasn't expecting that to happen!
Glad you updated, loved the chapter, though I am a little glad he didn't ask her out, he just seems a little too perfect. Hurry up and write another chapter!
4/13/2004 c6 2BlackPanther02
great cahppie...but so sad. actually, i was sort of expecting him to like sam or her sister, becuz thats how it works out a lot. but still very good. i like matt...he seems nice. and poor sam! but she still can't say yes to jeremy, or ill kill her. update soon.
~panther
3/31/2004 c6 8secret and morocco
HOLY CRAP! NOW WHAT? Thanks for leaving us hanging with that EVIL EVIL cliffie! UPDATE SOON!
3/29/2004 c6 16cherrynix
Fantastic! Admittedly i thought it was a little cliched at first, you know, cheesy Sweet Valley material but it's just been getting better and better. Somehow I'd imagined Jeremy would fall for Rachel but ah well. I'm hoping Jeremy wouldn't turn out to be so perfect as he seems but then that's just my opinion. Cheers mate!
3/28/2004 c6 Hannah
Poor Natalie! Stupid Jeremy! BOys are stupid, throw rocks at them...LOL. Have you seen that shirt? It's a great shirt! Anyways awesome story. I'm glad you're updating again. I was beginning to think you gave up on the story. Props!
3/27/2004 c6 DF8
OMG! O_O That did NOT just happen! NO! He likes SAM? SAM? That's just...that CAN'T be right! *wails* Omg...I totally wasn't expecting that...I was totally expecting him to ask her out...*sighs* This is horrible! Poor Natalie...;_;
Anyways, I like how Matt set them up like that. :) What a good friend. And I feel sorry for Sam. Burst appendix. Not good. -_-;;
I hope everything gets resolved soon...and that Jeremy falls for Natalie instead! :D Hehe...anyways, update soon, loved this chapter. :)
3/27/2004 c5 DF8
*smacks self on forehead* Since you hadn't updated in so long, I didn't bother to check whether you'd updated or not. *sighs* Well, I just checked today (obviously), and am now reviewing the fifth chapter. *grins*
I don't like Natalie's sister. Maybe because I have a little sister of my own, who thinks she's a goth or something, when all she does is wear a lot of black. *rolls eyes*
Well, wonderful chapter. :) I wonder if Jeremy heard? O_O How embarrassing! Well, am reading on...
3/27/2004 c6 10My Works 87
aW, So sad! Seriously. I'm feeling the heart break. Poor, poor girl. I'd be so pissed if a guy asked the same of me. Usuing me to get to my friend. They need to suck it up and get the girl themself! Hehheh. But yeah. Great chapter. I suggest that you update even QUICKER than the last time. Heh heh. Does that sound good? WEll, yeah. Love the story, just wish you'd update more often.
3/26/2004 c6 34Kendal
Oh... And the plot twists. ;)
Well. ::sigh:: Don't you just hate when that happens? You're totally in love with some guy and he likes your friend. I would just be happy if they realized I'm a girl. But whatever. It's nice, it's complicated, and I like. And I'm excited, because you updated this. I would cheer, but that's rather hard to do in the middle of a review and without sound. I do quite like this story... and I'm interested to see where it goes from here.
Do keep writing, s'il te plait.
3/26/2004 c6 Writerofascientist
Oh NO! How could you! No really, that was a twist I wasn't really expecting...though I wasn't expecting him to ask Natalie out either...hmm...what was I expecting? I dunno, but in any case I can't wait for the next chapter!
3/25/2004 c6 11DisasterousLetdown
Aw that was so sad! Poor Natalie! Oh and yes you updated sooner than I expected actually :) I love this story. Patiently waiting for the next update :)
~ Amy ~
3/24/2004 c6 2Gandella Raye
ah? what a jerk! no, no, no! thats not supposed to happen! whats wrong with you? no, I'm just kidding, I know exactly how to fix this, just write in that sam died of appendicitis and then jeremy goes crying to natalie! perfect, huh? at least consider it...please?
3/24/2004 c6 2GooseLives
*weeping uncontrolably*
No! This is torture! Thank you for it! I'm mildly obsessed with this this, please update soon!
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