for Lies of the Heart1/9/2004 c4 Ariana
This is really good. I enjoy the comedy and the little bits of ramonca as she deals with her conflict. Yummy!
This is really good. I enjoy the comedy and the little bits of ramonca as she deals with her conflict. Yummy!
12/23/2003 c4 Simon
Oh my gosh! That was so sweet!
I don't know how to explain it, but your writing is just so clean and fresh sounding. It's really smooth!
Your plot seems like one that has been written before, but in a curious way it's not. There's something about it that's really grabbing my attention, and makeing me want to read more!
Nat is so cool! She reminds me of someone but (once again!) I can't seem to put my finger on it! She's not perfect and she does make a "fool" of herslef sometimes, and I think that's vital in charactorization! It seems I can relate to her in some way of my life!
Jermey...hehe. now I know who he reminds me of! Lol.
I hope you up-date soon! I'm not a member of this site so I don't have an acount here...I'd really appreshate if you'd email your chapters when you update! Thanks!
Happy Holidays!
Simone
Oh my gosh! That was so sweet!
I don't know how to explain it, but your writing is just so clean and fresh sounding. It's really smooth!
Your plot seems like one that has been written before, but in a curious way it's not. There's something about it that's really grabbing my attention, and makeing me want to read more!
Nat is so cool! She reminds me of someone but (once again!) I can't seem to put my finger on it! She's not perfect and she does make a "fool" of herslef sometimes, and I think that's vital in charactorization! It seems I can relate to her in some way of my life!
Jermey...hehe. now I know who he reminds me of! Lol.
I hope you up-date soon! I'm not a member of this site so I don't have an acount here...I'd really appreshate if you'd email your chapters when you update! Thanks!
Happy Holidays!
Simone
12/18/2003 c1 punkrockprincess900
hey i totally LOVE this beginning! Its so i dunno 'suspence like' lol well off to read more...im lovin it!
hey i totally LOVE this beginning! Its so i dunno 'suspence like' lol well off to read more...im lovin it!
12/5/2003 c4 
10My Works 87
FINALLY you updated. I love this story, and this chapter was great. So please don't wait as long to update again, because I missed this story...
10My Works 87FINALLY you updated. I love this story, and this chapter was great. So please don't wait as long to update again, because I missed this story...
12/4/2003 c4 Dariel
Hiya!
I just wanted to say that I absolutely love your story! And not only because the same thing happened to me (or still happens u_u patethic, I know but I can't help)! I was so surprised when I read the prologue, pointing at the screen and yelling "MEGOSH, I DID!" ^_^ Would pay a million to see myself back then. Haha. So yeah, I can really identify with your poor heroine there! And that's one of the reason's why I love the story! Don't worry, I'm not gonna go into detail ^_^ I won't burden poor strangers with Dariel's problems with guys..Just why is it so damn difficult? *snorts*
But back to what I wanted to say! Second reason why I like the story is your incredibly fresh writing style! It really amazes me! All the thoughts and Nat's way of acting! It's so real, as if the story is playing right in front of my eyes! So great! And Nat's humour! Bwahahaha! Or should I better say sarcasm? ^_^ Love it! Yup, I admit it, I'm also one of the "last sentence of the fourth chapter" lovers :P I was laughing so hard! Perfect ending for a perfect chapter! Gods, I could repeat almost every sentence and tell you how much I laughed about it! Sam is so cool! I like her a lot! Just the perfect friend! So yeah, I'm really really looking forward to reading the next chapter! *dances around in anticipation* Hope you find the time to update, some time! Keep up the great work!
Till next time,
Dariel ^_^
Hiya!
I just wanted to say that I absolutely love your story! And not only because the same thing happened to me (or still happens u_u patethic, I know but I can't help)! I was so surprised when I read the prologue, pointing at the screen and yelling "MEGOSH, I DID!" ^_^ Would pay a million to see myself back then. Haha. So yeah, I can really identify with your poor heroine there! And that's one of the reason's why I love the story! Don't worry, I'm not gonna go into detail ^_^ I won't burden poor strangers with Dariel's problems with guys..Just why is it so damn difficult? *snorts*
But back to what I wanted to say! Second reason why I like the story is your incredibly fresh writing style! It really amazes me! All the thoughts and Nat's way of acting! It's so real, as if the story is playing right in front of my eyes! So great! And Nat's humour! Bwahahaha! Or should I better say sarcasm? ^_^ Love it! Yup, I admit it, I'm also one of the "last sentence of the fourth chapter" lovers :P I was laughing so hard! Perfect ending for a perfect chapter! Gods, I could repeat almost every sentence and tell you how much I laughed about it! Sam is so cool! I like her a lot! Just the perfect friend! So yeah, I'm really really looking forward to reading the next chapter! *dances around in anticipation* Hope you find the time to update, some time! Keep up the great work!
Till next time,
Dariel ^_^
11/24/2003 c4 4shadowdreamer7598
Lol, I like the last sentence! The whole story too, of course. This is really good, I want to see what happens! Update SOON, please!
4shadowdreamer7598Lol, I like the last sentence! The whole story too, of course. This is really good, I want to see what happens! Update SOON, please!
11/24/2003 c4 2BlackPanther02
i love it! its so funny and realistic. it reminds me so much of my life! okay-sie, thats it, update soon!
2BlackPanther02i love it! its so funny and realistic. it reminds me so much of my life! okay-sie, thats it, update soon!
11/21/2003 c4 2Gandella Raye
lol, i hope lady luck keeps working her magic, but stays at a safe distance :) hope you update in the near future man!
2Gandella Rayelol, i hope lady luck keeps working her magic, but stays at a safe distance :) hope you update in the near future man!
11/21/2003 c4 Moonlit Aphrodite
aw, that was so cute. I like how you compared it to all the sappy romance scenes you find in movies or books.
Great job!
Please update soon.
~Kristin
aw, that was so cute. I like how you compared it to all the sappy romance scenes you find in movies or books.
Great job!
Please update soon.
~Kristin
11/21/2003 c4 DF8
Haha, that was classic! :D Lol, I love it! And I love the fact that you updated! :D Jeremy is so incredibly hot (even though he's just a fictional character, lol), and Natalie's so realistic it's scary. ^^;; Lol, jk. But this is really a kick-ass story! Update ASAP! :D
Haha, that was classic! :D Lol, I love it! And I love the fact that you updated! :D Jeremy is so incredibly hot (even though he's just a fictional character, lol), and Natalie's so realistic it's scary. ^^;; Lol, jk. But this is really a kick-ass story! Update ASAP! :D
11/21/2003 c4 GzDzohotmail.com
Mouth drooling...I'm glad you started this again! Hope to see more soon!
Mouth drooling...I'm glad you started this again! Hope to see more soon!
11/21/2003 c4 11DisasterousLetdown
Wow that was a really nice chapter, I enjoyed it alot. I hope Heather will keep her slutty hands off of Jeremy, he's suppose to be with Natalie (gives a wink) Keep updating I love this story, you are so talented!
Amy
11DisasterousLetdownWow that was a really nice chapter, I enjoyed it alot. I hope Heather will keep her slutty hands off of Jeremy, he's suppose to be with Natalie (gives a wink) Keep updating I love this story, you are so talented!
Amy
11/17/2003 c3 Courtney Rodgers
Hey, why did you have to stop it there?
Great story!
Keep writing, and fast.
Hey, why did you have to stop it there?
Great story!
Keep writing, and fast.