for Lies of the Heart5/29/2003 c2 Kiss Of The Irish
Wow, I'm impressed with this story as well. (Can you see that I'm going through all your stories now?) I feel her pain - it's so hard to approach the guy who've fantasized about for so long but who doesn't even know you're alive. Been there, done that, bought the T-shirt. =P I can't wait to see what happens when she does attempt to talk to him!
Wow, I'm impressed with this story as well. (Can you see that I'm going through all your stories now?) I feel her pain - it's so hard to approach the guy who've fantasized about for so long but who doesn't even know you're alive. Been there, done that, bought the T-shirt. =P I can't wait to see what happens when she does attempt to talk to him!
5/29/2003 c2 daydreamer
really nice as...I once went through something like this myself. I don't know if you are/were in this situation but just about everything anout him is right(even the wrongs).
Anyway keep on writng. Seems real promising.
really nice as...I once went through something like this myself. I don't know if you are/were in this situation but just about everything anout him is right(even the wrongs).
Anyway keep on writng. Seems real promising.
5/20/2003 c1 Linda
Cool story!Sounds a little bit like me...Keep writing!:D
Cool story!Sounds a little bit like me...Keep writing!:D
5/16/2003 c2 cH3LL3
hey this is going great. you're off to a great start. cant wait for the next chapter. this story is just like my real life hehe...:)exactly like it.
hey this is going great. you're off to a great start. cant wait for the next chapter. this story is just like my real life hehe...:)exactly like it.
5/11/2003 c2 
3wishinstar
i hope she does talk to him- and its prolouge,and at the end of a story it epilouge. u should prob fix that
3wishinstari hope she does talk to him- and its prolouge,and at the end of a story it epilouge. u should prob fix that
5/11/2003 c2 3MystifiedAzure
I like where this is going...can't wait to read the nxt chap and see if she does actually talk to him...please update fast!
3MystifiedAzureI like where this is going...can't wait to read the nxt chap and see if she does actually talk to him...please update fast!
5/11/2003 c2 jovial pepper doll
this is a great first chapter! i love the occasional humour! i can totally relate to this story too... all in all it's great. very well written! look forward to the rest!
p.s. read Pollen (my story)
this is a great first chapter! i love the occasional humour! i can totally relate to this story too... all in all it's great. very well written! look forward to the rest!
p.s. read Pollen (my story)