for Lies of the Heart10/9/2006 c18 hellokittygirl
You are one of the most talented writers I have EVER come across, and believe me, that a lot. =D Your story is ... phenomenal (sp?). I loved it so much. All of the raw emotion in it. It was absolutely brilliant. In the beginning, I thought she would end up with Jeremy, but then the little hints and clues proved me wrong. =) You truly have a beautiful story here.
-Lqd
You are one of the most talented writers I have EVER come across, and believe me, that a lot. =D Your story is ... phenomenal (sp?). I loved it so much. All of the raw emotion in it. It was absolutely brilliant. In the beginning, I thought she would end up with Jeremy, but then the little hints and clues proved me wrong. =) You truly have a beautiful story here.
-Lqd
9/26/2006 c18 
8incandescente
i read through this story. i loved it. :) simple cliche at first, but ended with a twist. originality. :) continue writing!
8incandescentei read through this story. i loved it. :) simple cliche at first, but ended with a twist. originality. :) continue writing!
9/17/2006 c18 AlexisBo
This story was absolutely fantastic. I loved it :-D The last chapter had me tearing up!
This story was absolutely fantastic. I loved it :-D The last chapter had me tearing up!
8/20/2006 c18 Kristina
WAW! :D I guess that about sums it up! Hahah! Fantastic! Magnificent! Loved it! Gawd! Hope you have as much success in your other stories as much as you had in this!
WAW! :D I guess that about sums it up! Hahah! Fantastic! Magnificent! Loved it! Gawd! Hope you have as much success in your other stories as much as you had in this!
8/14/2006 c18 2xrubyxredxrainxdropsx
I love this story! I added this story to my favorite stories list.
The ending's really well-written, and it was cool when Nat punched Jessica.
Do guys really express their emotions so easily? I always thought guys were...a bit...not really types of people who would open up about their emotions, but anyway, maybe they do. Other than that, your story's great!
xx
2xrubyxredxrainxdropsxI love this story! I added this story to my favorite stories list.
The ending's really well-written, and it was cool when Nat punched Jessica.
Do guys really express their emotions so easily? I always thought guys were...a bit...not really types of people who would open up about their emotions, but anyway, maybe they do. Other than that, your story's great!
xx
7/25/2006 c1 PrincessPeach
This is a truly spectacular story. Serioulsy. I loved the way you made the characters complex and interesting. Matt is great! And your style is incredible. Plus the plot is beyond adorable. Why didn't you publish this?
This is a truly spectacular story. Serioulsy. I loved the way you made the characters complex and interesting. Matt is great! And your style is incredible. Plus the plot is beyond adorable. Why didn't you publish this?
7/6/2006 c18 rollwithit
yay im happy for nat! haha i didnt want to post the same thing for every chapter, but if i did it would be "great twist"! i really liked the twists and turns in the story, they were really entertaining. thanks for a good read!
yay im happy for nat! haha i didnt want to post the same thing for every chapter, but if i did it would be "great twist"! i really liked the twists and turns in the story, they were really entertaining. thanks for a good read!
7/6/2006 c9 rollwithit
things are getting very interesting! i really like the way the story is progressing
things are getting very interesting! i really like the way the story is progressing
7/4/2006 c18 10cherrypiesizzle
This was...awesome. I loved it so, so much. WOW. jeez, I am absolutely awestruck. That was great. So sweet. Love triangle, eh? -wink- I'm usually not into those type of things, but I'm making an exception..
10cherrypiesizzleThis was...awesome. I loved it so, so much. WOW. jeez, I am absolutely awestruck. That was great. So sweet. Love triangle, eh? -wink- I'm usually not into those type of things, but I'm making an exception..
7/4/2006 c18 raelia
holy crap. i'm so glad she grew up and owned up to all her deceit. i'm a sucker for happy endings though, so great job!
holy crap. i'm so glad she grew up and owned up to all her deceit. i'm a sucker for happy endings though, so great job!