for Lies of the Heart12/29/2005 c18 
1a Leader by Default
This is OH SO VERY COMPLETE.Very well done.Very well written.Fantastic job.
1a Leader by DefaultThis is OH SO VERY COMPLETE.Very well done.Very well written.Fantastic job.
12/29/2005 c18 46Lavender L. C
This was bitter sweet for me. I really didn't want to it end, but I did. I loved reading it. But I was curious, where do you get your inspiration from? Some people say watching chick flicks and eating ice cream helps. So far the ice cream only seems to go to my hips. I'm really interested in your answer, so please get back too me! :D
GREAT JOB AGAIN! This story ROCKED!
46Lavender L. CThis was bitter sweet for me. I really didn't want to it end, but I did. I loved reading it. But I was curious, where do you get your inspiration from? Some people say watching chick flicks and eating ice cream helps. So far the ice cream only seems to go to my hips. I'm really interested in your answer, so please get back too me! :D
GREAT JOB AGAIN! This story ROCKED!
12/28/2005 c18 Stephanie
It's super awesome! Very great! Good job!
It's super awesome! Very great! Good job!
12/28/2005 c18 braincelldiffusion
omg i really like this story alot. great job here. and nat and matt just make the cutest couple ever. yaye!
omg i really like this story alot. great job here. and nat and matt just make the cutest couple ever. yaye!
12/27/2005 c18 1Under the Stars
from the very minute matt was first introduced into the story, i wanted him and natalie to get together. and then when he mentioned his plan, i knew something was up. i loved it. i got excited and happy and sad and it was just good
1Under the Starsfrom the very minute matt was first introduced into the story, i wanted him and natalie to get together. and then when he mentioned his plan, i knew something was up. i loved it. i got excited and happy and sad and it was just good
12/26/2005 c7 3oohsnapp
oh snap! hahahaha! Damn, I love this story. God, Nat and Matt really make a cute couple. I just don't see her with Jeramy. . .
3oohsnappoh snap! hahahaha! Damn, I love this story. God, Nat and Matt really make a cute couple. I just don't see her with Jeramy. . .
12/17/2005 c18 1goldenphoenix83
a wonderfully sweet ending! It made Natalie sound content and finally confident of herself. I was hoping for some sort of a public announcement of Matt's love to Natalie, and what you did was pretty close. The effect was the whole school now knows the rumors are false etc. NYU is a great school btw and it is on my list of ideal schools lol.
it's really convenient that everything fits at the end and everything is resolved and Natalie and Matt (my favorite pairing) is together.
excellent work!
1goldenphoenix83a wonderfully sweet ending! It made Natalie sound content and finally confident of herself. I was hoping for some sort of a public announcement of Matt's love to Natalie, and what you did was pretty close. The effect was the whole school now knows the rumors are false etc. NYU is a great school btw and it is on my list of ideal schools lol.
it's really convenient that everything fits at the end and everything is resolved and Natalie and Matt (my favorite pairing) is together.
excellent work!
12/17/2005 c17 goldenphoenix83
yay I am so glad Natalie finally stood up for herself! Throughout this story, I have noticed Natalie getting stronger(not physically), from an initially obsessing, lacking self-confidence girl, to a more mature and capable girl of handling her problems. It's much better than everyone knows the truth and Jeremy is very understanding.
I wished you had elaborated on the drink spilling part but I guess it was to suggest that Natalie didn't see that "accident" as such a huge humiliation and disaster as she would have weeks ago. She handled Jessica's mocking well and since we are so close to the end of the story, I am so excited (almost bouncing up and down) to see what the ending is. I have a rough idea, but it's always nice to see it written out...
yay I am so glad Natalie finally stood up for herself! Throughout this story, I have noticed Natalie getting stronger(not physically), from an initially obsessing, lacking self-confidence girl, to a more mature and capable girl of handling her problems. It's much better than everyone knows the truth and Jeremy is very understanding.
I wished you had elaborated on the drink spilling part but I guess it was to suggest that Natalie didn't see that "accident" as such a huge humiliation and disaster as she would have weeks ago. She handled Jessica's mocking well and since we are so close to the end of the story, I am so excited (almost bouncing up and down) to see what the ending is. I have a rough idea, but it's always nice to see it written out...
12/17/2005 c16 goldenphoenix83
now Sam has found out most of Natalie's plan and I expected Natalie to be in the fix she is in now, although those rumors flying around are confusing, especially the one about Jeremy using Natalie to get Sam.
Poor Matt! I am glad Natalie read his journal (it was good how the description of the girl he likes sounds just like Natalie, since I remember she curled her hair during that night)and now knows she is in love with him.
the story is getting emotional and sometimes heartbreaking and a bit frustrating seeing Natalie getting into another fight with Matt.
wonderful job! :-D
now Sam has found out most of Natalie's plan and I expected Natalie to be in the fix she is in now, although those rumors flying around are confusing, especially the one about Jeremy using Natalie to get Sam.
Poor Matt! I am glad Natalie read his journal (it was good how the description of the girl he likes sounds just like Natalie, since I remember she curled her hair during that night)and now knows she is in love with him.
the story is getting emotional and sometimes heartbreaking and a bit frustrating seeing Natalie getting into another fight with Matt.
wonderful job! :-D
12/17/2005 c12 goldenphoenix83
hey againthe story is going through many twists and turns! I am glad your chapters are getting longer and it seems as if Natalie's plan is working...(Jeremy and Sam are just going to be friends but Jeremy seems to like Natalie, perhaps because her kiss from the party is still on his mind...)I am not sure what your plans are for the characters but I am thinking Natalie will eventually find out that MATT is the GUY FOR HER, not JEREMY.
still, it's fun to read! fantastic chapter! yay!:-)
hey againthe story is going through many twists and turns! I am glad your chapters are getting longer and it seems as if Natalie's plan is working...(Jeremy and Sam are just going to be friends but Jeremy seems to like Natalie, perhaps because her kiss from the party is still on his mind...)I am not sure what your plans are for the characters but I am thinking Natalie will eventually find out that MATT is the GUY FOR HER, not JEREMY.
still, it's fun to read! fantastic chapter! yay!:-)
12/17/2005 c7 goldenphoenix83
ah I can imagine the torture and pain of knowing your crush liking your best friend more. So I think it's brave of Natalie to try to hook them up still, although she is still hoping for Jeremy to like her. Reading that letter was probably a heart-wrenching experience and I wished you had described her feelings with more details, to make it more dramatic. The part about her agreeing to Jeremy and being heartbroken inside was good.
I am so excited and eager to see what happens! I was kind of expecting Matt to come into the picture and he sounds so sweet!great job!
ah I can imagine the torture and pain of knowing your crush liking your best friend more. So I think it's brave of Natalie to try to hook them up still, although she is still hoping for Jeremy to like her. Reading that letter was probably a heart-wrenching experience and I wished you had described her feelings with more details, to make it more dramatic. The part about her agreeing to Jeremy and being heartbroken inside was good.
I am so excited and eager to see what happens! I was kind of expecting Matt to come into the picture and he sounds so sweet!great job!
12/17/2005 c6 goldenphoenix83
yay so far I have gain quite a clear impression of Natalie's personality, which is actually quite realistic sounding. Some of her ideas/thoughts are "pathetic" in a way but funny and I guess it just shows how desperate she is. I like her character but I am already getting ideas that she will never get Jeremy (and now his crush on Sam, which was harsh and surprising, makes Matt seem like a more possible guy for Natalie).
great job so far!
yay so far I have gain quite a clear impression of Natalie's personality, which is actually quite realistic sounding. Some of her ideas/thoughts are "pathetic" in a way but funny and I guess it just shows how desperate she is. I like her character but I am already getting ideas that she will never get Jeremy (and now his crush on Sam, which was harsh and surprising, makes Matt seem like a more possible guy for Natalie).
great job so far!
12/16/2005 c18 20sloppy firsts
i've just finished your story and i have to say it was so maturely done that i'm in awe. you're writing is top notch and the emotions you convey are so deep. this story had a bit of everything that makes up a great romance story. humor, betrayal, pain, heartache, laughter and strained and strengthed relationships. alot like shakespeare's plays. but i'm getting sidetracked :) just wanted to say that your writing has mostly certainly grown throughout the story and it all seemed so surreal. utter perfection. okay i'm done raving.
keep writing always
s2 chaos
20sloppy firstsi've just finished your story and i have to say it was so maturely done that i'm in awe. you're writing is top notch and the emotions you convey are so deep. this story had a bit of everything that makes up a great romance story. humor, betrayal, pain, heartache, laughter and strained and strengthed relationships. alot like shakespeare's plays. but i'm getting sidetracked :) just wanted to say that your writing has mostly certainly grown throughout the story and it all seemed so surreal. utter perfection. okay i'm done raving.
keep writing always
s2 chaos
12/12/2005 c18 Jaded182
OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! So amazingly ADORABLE! I kinda relate with Natalie, I mean, being in love with a guy who doesn't even know you exist. But I just knew she was going to end up with Matt. And I feel little butterflies in my stomach now, because that was just beyond adorable! I am SUCH a hopeless romantic! :d AMAZING story, AMAZINGLY well-written. I just found it today and I read it in probably 4 hours or so. I couldn't tear my eyes from it! Aw! SO ADORABLE! Loved it!
OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! So amazingly ADORABLE! I kinda relate with Natalie, I mean, being in love with a guy who doesn't even know you exist. But I just knew she was going to end up with Matt. And I feel little butterflies in my stomach now, because that was just beyond adorable! I am SUCH a hopeless romantic! :d AMAZING story, AMAZINGLY well-written. I just found it today and I read it in probably 4 hours or so. I couldn't tear my eyes from it! Aw! SO ADORABLE! Loved it!