for Lies of the Heart12/9/2005 c18 emerald
*sigh* that was sweet and a perfect ending:D
*sigh* that was sweet and a perfect ending:D
12/4/2005 c2 Samantha
I love this story so far, and whats really, really creepy is that my best friend's name is Natalie, and we both obsess over two different guys. Basically this story could be us on any average school day. I even have blue eyes like your Sam!
I can't wait to see where this goes, you're a wonderful writer.signed,Samantha
I love this story so far, and whats really, really creepy is that my best friend's name is Natalie, and we both obsess over two different guys. Basically this story could be us on any average school day. I even have blue eyes like your Sam!
I can't wait to see where this goes, you're a wonderful writer.signed,Samantha
12/2/2005 c18 
6Pigment of Your Imagination
Aw...how...sweet & nice & cute! I'm like a grinning idiot right now..i wish..there would be one more chapter! & there will! cuz i said so! hahaha! Anyways...write more stories! write more! & ill give u cookies! :D So..bubi now. I've been sitting in the jacuzzi for so long reading this that my fingers are all prunny! ew! & my toes dont qualify as toes anymore! even the..prunny gods would be shocked! o.O Soo bye!
Angie
P.S. anywhere i can find myself a matt? his cousin..a twin maybe?
6Pigment of Your ImaginationAw...how...sweet & nice & cute! I'm like a grinning idiot right now..i wish..there would be one more chapter! & there will! cuz i said so! hahaha! Anyways...write more stories! write more! & ill give u cookies! :D So..bubi now. I've been sitting in the jacuzzi for so long reading this that my fingers are all prunny! ew! & my toes dont qualify as toes anymore! even the..prunny gods would be shocked! o.O Soo bye!
Angie
P.S. anywhere i can find myself a matt? his cousin..a twin maybe?
12/1/2005 c18 3stanhops
This story was absolutely spectacular. I mean absolutely wonderful. I don't deserve to use the English language because of the beauty of LOTH. I can't express how much I love this story. I even stayed up until 2 in the morning to read it all in on shot (it took me two hours b/c I savored every word and this was on a school night...and I'm first in my class proving how much my sleep time is important for me to do well in my classes, but I sacrificed that all...I even missed a test this morning b/c I slept in late for this story). I congragulate you for completing it. I was rooting for Matt all along and I am so HAPPY things turned out the way they did. I was fortunate to have been able to read this work. I hope to read more tales from you soon. GREAT JOB!
3stanhopsThis story was absolutely spectacular. I mean absolutely wonderful. I don't deserve to use the English language because of the beauty of LOTH. I can't express how much I love this story. I even stayed up until 2 in the morning to read it all in on shot (it took me two hours b/c I savored every word and this was on a school night...and I'm first in my class proving how much my sleep time is important for me to do well in my classes, but I sacrificed that all...I even missed a test this morning b/c I slept in late for this story). I congragulate you for completing it. I was rooting for Matt all along and I am so HAPPY things turned out the way they did. I was fortunate to have been able to read this work. I hope to read more tales from you soon. GREAT JOB!
11/30/2005 c18 2chapsticklips
Awe, that is such a sweet ending.You're a really talented writer, and the ending definately ended the story well.
2chapsticklipsAwe, that is such a sweet ending.You're a really talented writer, and the ending definately ended the story well.
11/30/2005 c18 Lyona
I actually love this story, once I got past the prologue. To be honest, I think it's distracting to the point where I think it would deter readers from your story. I would put it at the beginning of your fic.
Other than that, I think this is great. Your characters were cleverly written and just fun to read about. Your story sucked me in. Great job!
I actually love this story, once I got past the prologue. To be honest, I think it's distracting to the point where I think it would deter readers from your story. I would put it at the beginning of your fic.
Other than that, I think this is great. Your characters were cleverly written and just fun to read about. Your story sucked me in. Great job!
11/30/2005 c18 1Rhea Larkin
Yes, yes, YES!
That was beautiful. -tear- Such a happy ending. And so funny. I love how you peppered serious emotions with comic relief. Not just in this chapter, but in the whole story. I am so glad you finished, but I'm sad to see it go. I'll miss your characters. I felt like I knew 'em personally.
Love the last line. Great way to end it all. And, you didn't drag it on forever. You had perfect timing.
Oh, and I like how you didn't make Natalie the queen, although that would have been awesome. It would've been a bit too good to be true. For a moment there, I really thought she was gonna make it, but your allowing Jessica, despite everything, to still be queen keeps it all realistic. I also like how Nat admits that Jessica's tough. You're a very fair writer, and I'm glad not all of Nat's specific fantasies came true, though she does get her happy ending.
Wow. I'm almost at a loss for words. Your story was great. I can't stop praising your style, your characters, your plot, your themes...
(It also helps that I'm a hopeless romantic and this story just tickles me pink, so to speak. I need to find a Matt or even a Jeremy of my own, they're both so sweet and awesome.)
Huzzah for you! I hope this story goes places. FictionPress may be where it begins, but I can imagine it ending somewhere even bigger. Good luck, and thank you so very much! :)
1Rhea LarkinYes, yes, YES!
That was beautiful. -tear- Such a happy ending. And so funny. I love how you peppered serious emotions with comic relief. Not just in this chapter, but in the whole story. I am so glad you finished, but I'm sad to see it go. I'll miss your characters. I felt like I knew 'em personally.
Love the last line. Great way to end it all. And, you didn't drag it on forever. You had perfect timing.
Oh, and I like how you didn't make Natalie the queen, although that would have been awesome. It would've been a bit too good to be true. For a moment there, I really thought she was gonna make it, but your allowing Jessica, despite everything, to still be queen keeps it all realistic. I also like how Nat admits that Jessica's tough. You're a very fair writer, and I'm glad not all of Nat's specific fantasies came true, though she does get her happy ending.
Wow. I'm almost at a loss for words. Your story was great. I can't stop praising your style, your characters, your plot, your themes...
(It also helps that I'm a hopeless romantic and this story just tickles me pink, so to speak. I need to find a Matt or even a Jeremy of my own, they're both so sweet and awesome.)
Huzzah for you! I hope this story goes places. FictionPress may be where it begins, but I can imagine it ending somewhere even bigger. Good luck, and thank you so very much! :)
11/30/2005 c18 2BlackPanther02
AW. that was the sweetest ending i have ever had the pleasure of reading. And the entire story was pretty much amazing. and you are pretty much amazing. i hope your thinking about another young adult story sometime in the near future. Because that would make me ecstatically happy. yay. AMAZING. and I am pretty much in love with matt. ok. I'm done.~Panther
2BlackPanther02AW. that was the sweetest ending i have ever had the pleasure of reading. And the entire story was pretty much amazing. and you are pretty much amazing. i hope your thinking about another young adult story sometime in the near future. Because that would make me ecstatically happy. yay. AMAZING. and I am pretty much in love with matt. ok. I'm done.~Panther
11/30/2005 c18 1bummertime
Ok,you know the speech reminded me of mean girls with Cady adn she made the speech...classic. This is a great ending. =)
1bummertimeOk,you know the speech reminded me of mean girls with Cady adn she made the speech...classic. This is a great ending. =)
11/30/2005 c18 Salt and Vinegar Pringles
That was one of the most romantic and wonderful chapters I've ever read! It was so dramatic and just... ahh. Will there be an epilogue? I love this story.Sigh, sigh, sigh.
That was one of the most romantic and wonderful chapters I've ever read! It was so dramatic and just... ahh. Will there be an epilogue? I love this story.Sigh, sigh, sigh.